Hi there! ?Draserraney here, not shamelessly posting my review on my own novel ?First off, thank you for taking the time to check out my story. This is my first attempt at writing a romance-focused novel, and I truly hope it resonates with you. Even if it’s not quite your cup of tea, I deeply appreciate you giving it a chance.Writing this story has been an absolute joy—possibly one of the most enjoyable experiences I’ve had as a writer. (The only close contender might be A Zoologist’s Guide to Surviving Magical Creatures, a mix of comedy and adventure.)I hope this story brings a little light to your day. The first 10 chapters are free, so dive in and enjoy! Once you’ve finished, I’d love to hear your thoughts. Feel free to leave a review and vote for your favorite character—I’m always excited to hear what you think!Happy reading! ?✨
It's definitely something that I recommend. The premise is interesting, and the writing quality is high with little to no grammatical errors. It has clarity and is easy to understand on most occasions. At the same time, the protagonist has certainly grown on me as I read more chapters
after reading first demonic dragon,I had a lot of expectations for this novel and I'm glad i haven't been disappointed ?... Authorsama we need more chapters and regular release ???
I decided to try this novel and I was wowed I normally read FL novels and this is one of the few ML novels that managed to capture my focus and attention update regularly author, we need more chapters
The pace of the plot is moving too quickly, much like in the first chapter. Before diving into the story, it would be helpful to establish the world's backstory, provide descriptions of the protagonist's parents, and introduce the location where he was bullied. While the writing and grammar are strong, the rapid progression makes it difficult to connect with the character's development and the intensity of his hardships. Add a chapter exploring the bullying experience that could help to build empathy and showcase the protagonist's determination to overcome those hardship. Despite these areas for improvement, the story has great potential. Keep up the excellent work dear author
Really loving the book so far! Only early days so we don't have a whole lot of general world building, but we do have a lot of localized world building and I love that we're learning along with the MC about what's happening. I'm glad you haven't jumped straight to the MC getting betrayed by everything because that is a really overused plot device and while it works....it's not the best to see it in every other book lol *Spoiler*I am worrying though about how they're going to handle getting every skill to level 5 if they keep getting more new skills and personally I would've immediately attempted to clear the 5 dungeons since they're getting a new skill every-time but is what it is. The could potentially just save the skills papers for after the 4 months? Idk how reliable that would be though. They really do need to focus on farming these skills though, I would be using them every second I could! lol
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Homie has levelled up from 1 to 2 with this book
I'm just going crazy about these plots ???
"God Realm : Light and Dark"
So he was not done yet too?
Humans are creatures created by both the power of Light and Dark.