Heinrich rubbed his chin, "I wonder if those two will survive?"
Dawn.
it was thrilling it was awesome but invisble dragon
I, Melon Dao approve of this scripture and decided to add it to my forbidden library of culture. This venerable is very pleased as you are doing an honorable job of teaching and spreading culture and hope you continue this sacred quest.This scripture belongs to the genre of game to reality and Mc will develop an invincible family with different kinds of waifus (especially, Mother-in-law)Last but the least, This Scripture Has no NTR.
such an amazing and wonderful story. God bless
It is a really nice story where the balance between the game and real world is good.
Yoo! This is Iron_Angel_Mk_69 from Terra(Multiverse Travel) the name is still pending by the way. Anyway thanks for helping a brother out. Peace!
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Great story till now. Hope the quality is maintained
I finished volume 1 and I neither like it nor hate it, but I think I lean closer to "It's not for me." I think the MC relied too much on the system, which happens. The System's tasks didn't seem to help him grow or at least, I didn't notice that. It's definitely fast-paced, but maybe way too fast? MC just seems like a hot-blooded individual who acts first and then regrets after ? he didn't seem meticulous and thorough.
This novel had one of the best and unique idea I've seen in WN for the 2 years I'm on here.The story is also surprisingly well written.(no offence but webnovel isn't well know for well written novels.Most of them make no sense or are just plain bad)The personages are well crafted and creative. And even though I haven't seen much of the god.(current chapter is only 6)It looks good.So this book is definitely a worth you're time if this novel interests you.
A good read actually. But the descriptive department seems to be lacking. What I mean is that you really express yourselves and. I do feel the emotions of the characters. But the world background is what you need to describe the best. Anyways, continue working hard. Grammatical errors are also seen however just a bot of proofreading and you're done! Also, try increasing your vocab! Goodluck