So far even though there are only six chapters at this time, the book is honestly awesome in its progression, you are doing marvelous.
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I LOVE IT! MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE! IT GOT ME CRYING, BAWLING MAD HAHAHAHAHA LOVE IT! when is the next update? come on im getting excited
it is really a great story... the first 7 chapters were truly heart wrecking... never seen plot like this...i just want to say : update please! ^^
Wow just Wow, this is really great the pase might be a bit fast but that's personal opinion. Does anyone have any similar Noel's about Hinduism that tells the story of 1 person +1 if that person is op
Very good set up and original idea with good living character which can be connected to. The ability is balanced allowing for growth of the character being lengthy not like most system novels were the power level skyrockets
The story is good but I have things to say: To begin with, I don't tolerate the mother or her parents in general, because she is the archetype of a dominant mother and a weak and fearful father, it makes me sick. And what's with the names? Andrea Messi? How ridiculous, there are novels that have the names right and nothing happens. The theme of the video seems forced to me, an unknown child became known overnight, unless you have the direct or indirect help of someone famous or something famous, it is impossible.
Thanks for the update and for the record I have to go to the office and I will be there at baka bawal HAAHHAHA to get the plates and napkins and I will be there at baka
Hey Guys!!! It's been a while. I have been on a long involuntary break, but I'm back now, I will be adding new chapters shortly. Stay tuned and thanks for sticking around.
I want to start this review by saying I quite like it from what I've read so far.It is quite original and the world background is very interesting.Some negative points however are the writing quality, and the narration.While I do think that the writing quality isn't particularly bad I find that there's a lot of grammar mistakes and the expressions used could be improved quite a lot. As for the narration sometimes its simply dry and doesn't convey any meaning, or can get confusing with too much information at once when the sentences aren't structured well.Thanks author I really liked reading your ideas.
this is so awesome! I cant wait to read more chapters! f5f5f5f5 cant get enough! ff5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5ff5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5ff5f5f5f5f5f5f5ff5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5ff5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5ff5f5f5f5f5f5f5
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