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C3: [distantly] But what about the As? Is there any reason to believe that the As are speaking any truth? Hell, for that matter A1?
A great premise, not to boring but not too over the top, its taken well throughout the eleven chapters given and im sure the author is cooking with something. Though that said there is still room for improvement, like in every creative work out there, master your craft and dont give up dear author
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author should do something about mage's casting time.... it takes 2 minutes -3 minutes just to cast some spells and In superhuman battels just 1 sec time intervals can change the direction of battle
Only giving full reviews so that some public can come and chat with me so that we can together criticize this as i alone cant do it as it will me lonely and i dont want feel lonely, Beleive it
the only bad thing about this novel is there is not enough chapters
Honestly the dynamic of the relationship between the MC and her group is rather enjoyable. Instead of making everyone flock to the MC they have a girlfriend, as problematic as the relationship is proving to be. Beyond that the world has a good grasp of what's going on and as people come in more information is put out in an easy, understandable, and believable manner. I'm looking forward to see what else comes up from their trip plus how they deal with the problem they created. Thank you author and I am excited for more chapters.
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author literally nerfed the MC power. There are several places where MC could've devoured the enemies power, but he didn't do it for no reason, his martial spirit could've easily reached to the highest stage possible. Don't come up with a concept that you can't implement fully. BS
Hey guys, author here. This novel will start out with Xianxia, but there will be elements of Fantasy throughout it. Later on Science Fiction will also be added. The MC will not have a cheat like skill, everything he does will be doable by any other character. The only advantage the MC will have is his life experience, and the knowledge he brings with him from Earth. I hope everyone enjoys it. New chapters coming soon.
Been following this story for a when on Wattpad, the writings amazing and the story lines fantastic.The author knows how to pace his story.All in all very good novel that I recommend reading.
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