Is this novel really finished?
Do not read
This is a very entertaining book and I highly recommend to give it a shot and read it. It doesn’t give much away in the summery but once you read it you will enjoy it.
I love the cover and everything else
It's so alluring
Hello author I wanted to know if there is harem in this novel
Good novel interesting plot very much enthusiast about upcoming chapter hooked on story it's early for a review but i am doing it anyway have a good day and keep chapters coming
author, will you be elaborating on alex's life back on earth? i think that the betrayal of his bestfriend back on earth was not developed enough. (only mentioned here and there) hence, us readers could not really feel much about the reason he became the way he is. it would be nice if that part was spared a couple of chapters to explore so that you could give alex character depth just a little.
The Kingdom Building series presents a captivating storyline, but there are certain aspects that require further clarification and development. Allow me to address your concerns regarding the plot:
Arquebus:
The lack of explanation regarding barrel production and the manual manufacturing of arquebuses raises questions about the feasibility and efficiency of such processes without advanced machinery or smelting techniques.
Cannons:
The absence of a comprehensive explanation regarding the creation of cannons, especially cast iron cannons, leaves uncertainty about the availability of necessary resources, such as coal, for their construction.
Gunpowder:
The origin of saltpeter, a vital component of gunpowder, is not adequately addressed in the narrative. It is essential to establish a believable source of saltpeter and sulfur for sustained large-scale ammunition production.
Steam Engine:
While the introduction of a steam engine is intriguing, the story lacks details about its creation and the protagonist's ability to manufacture precise parts without access to machine tools or advanced engineering techniques.
Blackout:
The abilities and capabilities of the Blackout group, particularly their exceptional infiltration skills, may seem overly powerful and not fully explained within the context of the medieval setting.
Russell:
The abrupt transformation of Russell from a peaceful painter to a murderer lacks proper character development and motivation. It would benefit the story to establish dissatisfaction or conflicts within Russell's life before depicting him as someone capable of such actions.
Travel:
The ease with which characters traverse between different countries without established roads raises questions about the feasibility and time constraints involved. Additionally, the annual meetings of Blackout members, requiring extensive travel, seem logistically challenging in the absence of efficient transportation systems.
Overall, while the Kingdom Building series offers an engaging plot, there is room for improvement in providing more detailed explanations and addressing the logical and technical aspects of the depicted time period and technological advancements.
For starters, I don't mean to offend the author or his effort in the story, this is just my criticism.
The development of the world is interesting. The characters are interesting and have personality.
The biggest problem with the story is the protagonist himself, he's just too boring, especially his obsession with building a harem for jayden, this is just too annoying, we're 100 chapters into it and it doesn't seem like it's going to change anytime soon, it's totally disappointing to read the story, the mc is making fun of a boy's sexuality for following the prince, but he literally does the same thing with jayden???? Author I know you said this was going to change but the question is when? you are not going to insist on the protagonist being jayden's nanny for 200 chapters, are you?
I can see potential in your story????
Its such an amazing story my dear author??
I am looking forward for more chapters????????
Good luck??
These types of stories are my favorites. I hope that it will deliver ? ............................ ... . . . .. . . ... . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. .. . .
Intricacy is nice for a few chapters but taking the entire free period to impress an idea is too much. Huge potential for story acceleration but I just can't, with a clear mind, gamble on this tortoise speed storyline.