Exceptionally great so far. Syntactically a few things might be changed but in general, the story streams exceptionally pleasantly. Some of the time it may be a bit surged but keep going, Really good so far. Well done author!
To be sincere, this is an actually good book. I love the main character, and the way the overall story is developing. I'm looking forward to more amazing chapters author, keep up the good work.
MC acts like a total and utter idiot. I mean he is so childish, and stupid it ruins the story. Also he and everyone else in the story act like idiots as well. It feels so forced to be comedic but is utterly bad.
A little slow and confusing.i had to go back and re-read a couple of times to understand what was going on with the story. But all in all I think it is a good story.
Average translation, horrible editing. In specific, the capitalization, uniformity, text spacing was terrible. The stat screen and all of the ‘system’ stuff was just a mess to look at.The author can’t do simple arithmetic (what’s new), the novel is underwhelming, and for someone who knows hardly anything about DND, this novel just seemed like a bunch of gibberish.The TL says that anyone can enjoy it regulars less of whether they know DND or not, but it’s clearly not the case. Most of the text is just info drops or assumes you know DND knowledge.I don’t feel like spending my time writing a more thorough review for such an underwhelming novel.tl;dr: terrible novel for non-DND enthusiasts (probably still bad for DND enthusiasts because the author/TL got fundamental DND stuff wrong according to commenters)
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Story was amazing, I mean literally amazing. Character development is also better many most. But now maybe it has discontinued as he hasn't uploaded a chapter for a year, a pity. Anyways, you should definitely read it.
waite a minit wasent the Cold war after WWII so how is this world similar to that tis is more like the Middle Ages form Europe than the cold War era. I think the author needs to correct that.
I am looking forward to this one and can't wait to see what happens. I love this kind of story and it make the go by with out me knowing while reading
read out of curiosity, but kinda really bad advice. it's true that this type of writing can capture the attention of readers, but it's usually not the type of attention one would want. The suggestions on what to do with the MC would make MC far to Mary/Gary Sue, which isn't very pleasant to read. It also holes up and coming writers into holes and bad habits, not allowing them to explore while they're still growing. Just don't recommend following the advice listed, that's all.
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It good