I think the one major drawback of this novel is the main character. He is way too impatient about everything. You'd think a guy who spent years in a wheelchair, saw his mother almost get assassinated, and thinks his brother's death was part of some conspiracy would try to lay a bit lower and increase his strength more. I mean per the novel the MC's brother was roughly 20 times more powerful than the MC is at chapter 25 and had way more real world experience and the MC is trying to rush to figure out what happened to him. Maybe get stronger first. The world background seems relatively interesting. The other characters seem to be written with more sense than the MC which is nice. The problem is that they aren't the person you are reading about. The story development feels a bit rushed mostly because of the MC's personality.
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I am compelled to write this review because most of the reviews given for this novel are MISLEADING, MISINFORMING, and straight up LIE. The novel has no class, bad story development, bad character development, bad world development. I mean if you want to read, then sure but after 20-50 chapters you will come on your own and READ my review AGAIN.Lets talk about:1)Writing Quality:- Quality of writing is not bad, apart from some grammatical mistakes, I don't see anything that can be considered 'mood-destroying'.2)Story Development:- I know this is a cultivation/fantasy novel where MC is born OP. From the 1st chapter author starts describing characters that are heaven defying and renown across entire regions, but by the end of 10th chapter, all of those characters are shivering, wetting themselves and shivering when anything happens. The author doesnt have a proper scale for distinguishing between different levels of power, renown, strength etc. I know that author needs stronger villain to keep the story going but the novel feels like a summary version of a really bad cultivation novel. 3) Nomenclature:- The author is using some kind random name generator for naming everything. If he is naming sect, then he will generate 4 names, add all of them together and add sect at the end, eg: 'Saint Tiger Demon Beast Clan', this is a sect/clan in the novel. And this random name generator is used for naming of cities, regions, weapon class, cultivation class, and everything that exists in the novel apart from Names of humans. 3)Character design/development: Just sad. There is no development for other characters. If you are not a family of MC, you will not progress at all. Only MC & his family are allowed to progress. And I don't want to reveal anything but the MC has not aged one bit from 1st chapter till 150th chapter and he has gone from medium-strong in his own sect to strongest in entire continent. IN 1 YEAR. Author doesnt have any grasp of the TIME.4) World design: Usually any good novel writer will work on the concept, character and the novel setting and much more before starting to write the novel, but our AUTHOR is winging it, I will give you an example:1st to 10th chapter: MC stronger then 90% of his sect. now author needs a villain, bring top dog of his sect and make them fight. after winning MC stronger then everyone. so now author is in need of another stronger villain, lets make a new sect/empire, make an arrogant character of that empire who is more powerful then MC and have them bully the sect or target MC so MC will go and fight and while fighting will become as powerful as the character and win. Now author needs another sect/empire, AND SO THE CYCLE CONTINUES. The novel is written by a CHILD of age no more then 15. Or by a guy who couldn't mature past his adolescence. And it angers me that so many bots were used to give higher rating.
at least this story is decent and it's been a while since there is a novel about pc game like King's Avatar or at least not a VR game.Hope this could get picked up
The story is good since the Mc is a villain and he is quite smart, cunning, and ruthless when it comes to getting what he wants and destroying his enemies. The translation is passable and the translator updates chapters regularly.
I like it. The story is good, and the MC is competent. They actually care about the things that they create, and are actually pretty strong, despite being a stone. I like this book.
stop reading after 400 something (the chapter is called Age of Aggression), it goes completely downhill.otherwise it is pretty decent...
A bunch of dumb people in a story with out plot development. It is an bad written paper about why the knight class is bad. ...................
The novel is still beginning hence there isnt a lot of world background to give but It did mention terrain and created a situation where we could see it was a cultivation world with multiple species including demi-humans such as wolf/human hybrids. Overall it is a good read and will continue to read as long as it is updated.
petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
Dear author Im already a fan of your book one and this one is quite interesting too. I love the world background and the character building.....There is so much in this story to learn and live.
Your writing skill make the imagination alive. kuddo author....
all the best
This one here had a great outlook and starting theme. Man, I thought I found something to spend my time on but .....Everything just blasted into a mess. The villains I.e. Fallen Angels can literally do anything and everything. They can summon any and every race of the universe when, author repeatedly emphasises that they are just one 9f the many successful races. They have control over a space nuke and I don't think it cost them a lot because they use it more frequently than a successful person goes on the vacation.The Mc the gets power ups and everything he needs just in time and money does not matter. He could get it from any of the four or five types of shops introduced till now. Like we have all conquering general shop then class shop, quest shops, Castle shops, auction houses, Kingdom shops and many more to be introduced. Then the gods are just a bunch of useless spectators who are also similarly all knowing. Author states that the modern chips have stopped working but I don't know why helicopters are still working along with its all systems intact. And then again Angels are and just referees but to me they seem to be amnipotent... And girls are just high on hormones....