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Opening is quite outstanding. Characters are pretty decent too just lacking some fillers and emotions... Hope you'll work on it too best of luck from big brother.
there's no need to write a novel if you only update the chapters once a month, it looks like you really don't have the intention to write a novel, trash authorI will appreciate you if at least you update the chapters every day and be consistent, the problem with the story plot and your grammar which may be bad is another problem and still get a good star from me
Although the grammar is not food it has a good plot and great character
congrats on chapter 1000 It has been a fun journey so far with hopefully many chapters to come :)
If you are new to novels then it's pretty good ,But if it's a veteran web novel reader I'd rather advise you to skip this amateur system story
Though, I already stopped reading, but I felt like I should put a review in case author decides to go through his reviews and see what he might need to work on when writing another book.
First of, I say 5 star for update becaue I dont know about the update stability and there is already over 800 chapters.
Every other aspects lacks so badly, the ghost design was written really properly.
I mean he is a ghost but cannot see in the dark with or without a physic body. Him getting ambushed in dark by monsters/spirit like being or what that was in the first 40 chapters is weird.
Cant remember all the reason why I stopped reading this as it has been a while but the writing skill about a ghost as a main charater needs massive improvement.
What I do think is that author is wrote the character using the traits of a human instead of a ghost.
Anyway, goodluck to you improving, I'm not criticizing here but I'm stating what I feel it lacked. I dont know of chapters past the 50s, so there might have been improvement.
Thank you .
HOLY SHIT!! THIS IS BEING TRANSLATED THIS NOVEL IS SO GOOD!! IT'S ALREADY COMPLETED IN RAW.
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What is your reason for constantly choosing 100x books, it's ridiculously boring..After the first 10 chapters of the book, the main character is already a chapter ending boss.
Just read the first chapter, good one. If the story is really not about cultivation i'm selling my soul today. Go Aiden, commit third degree murder!
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Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.