Tl:DR "meh". Solid C-.Let me preface this review by stating the obvious: "THIS NOVEL DESPERATELY NEEDS AN EDITOR". now that that is out of the way I will continue.The bad: poor grammar, poor capitalisation / punctuation (often none, at all) and comically long run on sentences (I think I saw one paragraph long sentence with 6 "and"s in it back around chapter 10). The author is overly reliant on Autocowrong and it shows. How the novel flows would suggest that the author is not a native English speaker, and if that is the case then kudos for your effort friend, but you need an editor.There is a gaming term called Ludonarrative Dissonance, which describes the disconnect between a games narrative (the story) and the gameplay. In this work the author creates a similar dissonance by introducing a "genius scientist" which is overly reliant on his system and fails to have a single original thought. The overly ****** dialogue compounds this. It is hard to convince readers that your MC is a genius when he speaks in either short and choppy or long run on sentences.The meh: what could be fantastic fight chapters and power gains are glossed over instead of expanded on. The lack of detail transforms the elements which this genre typically does best into fluff; glossed over and quickly forgotten.The good: all the things which make this genre great are present; there is a solid foundation to build on.Closing thoughts: please, please... find an editor.
This is a very addicting book.Best book on heaven hell and redemption. This fully brings out your inner Angel demon.it also teaches history in a fun way. This is a book for the strong not the weak. I also know how many souls of sin and souls of virtues I have. I hope the author finishes it quickly but I will give him the time he needs
The writing quality is okay but some sentences do not use the proper grammar so if someone insists on reading a novel that has no errors whatsoever in writing, they wouldn’t read this. But overall, the story is great and it’s even an original novel! Not translated for once! The writing adds a little blemishes to the review but it’s still one of my favorite stories!
Why use soccer, not football? Seriously, just use football man, especially when the story is set in Great Britain. It just not right for me anyway.
I am loving reading about the wright family
Bad ending at all
Fantastic , beautiful story. Not your typical love story which makes this even more lovely. Great job!!!
Good good good
more update please love this book
A sweet book
it's interesting..
I'm so hooked with the story now! I can't wait to see where all of this is heading! Amazing storytelling!