I'm reading the manhwa of this and I want to read the story i more depth so I looked for the novel itself.
Story was amazing, I mean literally amazing. Character development is also better many most. But now maybe it has discontinued as he hasn't uploaded a chapter for a year, a pity. Anyways, you should definitely read it.
It was easy to follow and engaging. The characters had a good sold design which is always nice. Keep up the good work!
Good Job ............... I love ur story. The English was pretty good for me, I'm pretty understand for what u want tell. I hope you will write the story become much better. And keep the story up to date though.
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This story updates slowly, but consistantly. It is meant to be a funny read and the author manages to pull it off. We have a male protagonist still denying his homosexual tendencies (but nevertheless acting on it), a beautiful ML and as the best side character - a system which is clearly a fujoshi, torn between getting the host back in character and cheering him on.
Oh, and for the readers of Touch of irony: The crow is back! :D
Honestly I want to like this novel. I really do. Like, I see the potential it has but theres just that one thing thats really bugging me.
It's the fact that he is so... submissive.
Now what do I mean by that? He's clearly a dork who has never had a girlfriend in his life. He's a simpleton who would likely give up all his powers if his mom, mother (He has two moms) and sister asked him to. In our everyday language he would definitely be a simp. I think the thing that really bugged me was him admitting his secret to his sister. I said it in a comment but I found the build up for him telling the secret to be plainly infuriating and terrible. Author, in the nicest way possible I want to tell you that it was bad. But the big kicker is the fact that although he has all this power his real personality is still so...wimpy.
It's Honestly disappointing and I unfortunately will choose to drop this novel. If anyone else can stand a simpleton who acts like he's chasing skirts with the mind of a 30 year old man whose never been a women then feel free.
SPOILERS I've read up to 620 and I feel like I'm just being trolled by the author at this point. The author just decides to destroy the world that Gabriel/Karyk is from for absolutely no reason. Also whenever Gabriel/Karyk decides to kill or betray someone, it just miraculously happens that they had ulterior motives all along.
I'm gonna give you this rank because there is only one chapter, I like how It is good luke i gonna see you work in this new world.An is gonna have some gods or is gonna be a normal world.
Great read overall ........but there's just a lot of jabs to other novels, pok*mon, movies ...etc. that it started funny at first but as the story moves forward i kinda got tiered with all the ranting. I mean when all the action is going on... the MC will get lost in his own thoughts comparing his story with whatever anime/novel fits, pulling u out of the focus on the story.
You only have to read the first paragraph of the second chapter to fall in love with this way of writing, beautiful prose, interesting plot, good rhythm. I hope the novel becomes everything it promises in these first readings, good job
If you guys are looking for the netori, harem and r18 stuff might have to wait till this reach 100 chaps.
mc character growth is just too strange for someone that was essentially an otaku. Too much self identity crisis and mc is still stuck in thinking in the norm when he is pretty much in a ntr game. The moral thing is just getting annoying at this point, contradicting thoughts that just annoys me or most readers.
This is slow paced but don't central this around just the mc since it got boring reading it. Like adding about world building and how that world works from his research in his PC would probably help the mc make solid decisions.
Cause from all the chapters so far, he gets pissed most of the time like as if a stick got stuck in his ass when given some info from his "friends". The big events so far that should have boost his character growth a lot, always have a reason to revert him back to normalcy thinking. It was already annoying at the beginning but now it's 45 chapters and little changed other than his physical attributes.
Especially the revenge part where he thought this plan and how he was really gonna ruin this girl and even brags about how he will do it right from those shitty "revenge" stories he read in his previous world. Instead we get something that missed that claim..... it would be better if the author never added those sentences/reference cause it just made the mc even more unbearable.
it may make sense realistic wise but God dam is it an annoying/bad story telling. Nothing is really note worthy that would hook the reader because of the "slow pace" and the 2 chapters or so of r18 text are probably what 90% of the reader cared about.
The slow pace is just hard to pull off and may need to really amp his character. Cause at this point, you can just skip/skim chapters and probably won't miss anything important.