So far, the story just keeps getting better. Was hard to have to stop reading. Now, going to have to wait to read more. It's gonna be hard to wait. But, I'll have to.
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I don't know how the author does it, but with every passing chapter the story gets better and better. I know a bit more about the story than the crowd here as I'm a beta reader. Still I can't wait for y'all to see what happens in the future.
I was locked in it make me stop reading what I was reading before but the more I read the more I love it
As much as I enjoy reading LoL theme videos, it is incredibly jarring to read champion names by their Chinese slang terms that have been translated. Examples:Blind Monk - Lee SinGun Dude - GravesSun Lady - LeonaCardsharp - Twisted FateRock Man - MalphiteClockwork - OriannaVN - VayneI understand that the author may have left it as slang terms in the raws but I dislike having to learn awkward slang in order to read a novel. Oh, also... Orianna is female.
Definitely one of the most interesting and strange stories I ever read... The author tries to make something I've never seen before work, and does a pretty good job...
The story seems good.. however, i left at chapter 10 as the cultivation system seems to be in mess. Would not go deeper into it as if anybody can move past Chapter 10, then they are good to go as they are comfortable with the cult. system. However, i was not as i felt that it became more and more confusing which irritated me. Also i wish the author gets a good editor as there were many grammatical issues.
The novel is very beautiful Please finish it. ??Donu200c't stop ??................................................................................... ................................................................................... ................................................................................... ................................................................................... ................................................................................... ................................................................................... ................................................................................... ................................................................................... ................................................................................... ................................................................................... ................................................................................... ................................................................................... ................................................................................... ................................................................................... ................................................................................... ................................................................................... ................................................................................... ................................................................................... ................................................................................... ................................................................................... ................................................................................... ................................................................................... I wrote all these points down Because it is written that the review must not be less than 140 ?
meh
As compared to other trail releases its quite good and its translation is also good.
Well thought and the new breathe of air, many m.c with system is always the same but in this novel the m.c is just a 2nd user haha nice one.. good story line and superb idea.
great novel.................................................................................................................................