I find this story humorous and a great break from working very hard and serious all the time. It makes me laugh. I laugh even more at the comments. I feel sorry for all the female readers who come for romance or a strong female lead only to find the cover misleading them as Master Rabbinkn and Trevon McArthur are definitely neither. The only thing that could top this is if Trevon wrote the same events from his point of view.
They say the MC is a mercenary and a lagendary one in fact but he acts like a pussycat he listens to what his employer says and has no self respect and most the females are b,itches who try to **** with MC life and make him miserable and the MC is okay with he can easily get another job so why not get another one
Good writing, story flow and characters.Instresting plot thus far. good use of portraying the evolving psychological mindset of the MC
Come on people its been more than 5 weeks , kindly vote for this awesome story. The idea is new and fresh expecting to experience multiple stories which froge the MC to have a Strong Unyielding character and a powerful knowledge of cultivation just like the MC of Emperors Domination so please vote.
Giving this book the 5 stars it deserves as I honestly have no complaints for this book. The Writing Quality is good, I mean, very very good. I really like how the Author writes. Descriptions for the world's and the characters (including the ghosts) were vivid and easy to picture and understand. As for the characters' emotions, author had portrayed it well. I had read past the first action scene (where the mc almost die) and I was awe-struck by the execution of Author's amazing story-telling. The Author has perfect grasp of the mc's disheveled emotion and the situation he's in. The scenes were written so well that it felt like it have a momentum of its own. Like, there's a time when I got excited at how fast things was escalating, I was suddenly brought to a stop, forced to ponder over the previous paragraphs, feeling the transitions of the mc's emotions. For the story development, it's fast and captivating. Well, personally, I really like fast-paced novel so this novel truly suits my taste. With just a chapter, the book had successfully piqued my interest. How so? An action scene had taken place at the very first chapter. Not some ramblings to describe the world like some always did, but action! The enemy, the forces that was against them, and what's the conflict between them was introduced all (with vivid descriptions as well!) just by the first chapter. (If this is what you call as a hook then Author, you got me!)For the character design, it's nice I guess? Well, I could vaguely perceive the mc's personality from the way he converse (The Author is really good at conversations! It wasn't stiff and flowed out so naturally that their words carry some kind of an emotion/ tone?). And also, the way he thinks and reacts when he was in danger. It was done so well that it had successfully brought his character alive.For the world background, uhmm, how to say? I think the Author had done a lot of preparations for this. Like, there was an auxiliary chapter dedicated for this. Yes, it's separated from the story but I don't mind so, Good Job Author! And lastly for the Update Stability, it's recently updated so I don't think there's any problem with this.Overall, I really enjoy reading this book. The writing was smooth and flows so well that it was really pleasing for the eye. Honestly, this book might be too advanced for me, I think, as there are times when I need to search for the 'alien' words to understand the meanings of each sentences but of course, it's my problem, don't worry about it. So.. Thank you for writing such an amazing book!
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The story is amazing I'll give you five star. I hope you continue writing. 140 words 140 words 140 words 140 words 140 words 140 words 140 words 140 words
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Heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeey.I like itPlease continue. Keep up the good work.Hmmm, so this is Bird Cat hahahaha, exp exp exp exp exp
It's not that bad....actually it is quite good...I will just request you to don't drop it.....it's really annoying?...well keep up the good work......
this story is so goood! the author surely did a lot of work on this. im so hooked up with this story! i never thoight that i will like this kind of book. good job author!