NICE...........I AM STARTING TODAY BUT I ALREADY TAKE A LIKING TO IT..................................................KEEP IT UP UP BRO....
Off to a great start. This author writes with vivid description and does a nice job painting a picture in the readers mind. I like the main character and the development so far. Can’t wait for more!!
Hi! This is Ada, an editor of the international Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I. I see great potential in your book, but your book is so underrated here. Thus, I invited you to join the contest a week ago. Please reply to me. Let’s discuss in detail.
This story is absolutely garbage.The mc is an idiot, the story is full with loophole, and some female characters and arrogant young master are too dumb to be alive.I had to drop this one after 10 chapters, i couldn't hang on anymore.It is a waste since the ideal is interesting.
The progression feels to fast and I dislike the characters so far. Feels like a wish fulfillment story. But as far as begining writing this story has some potential maybe it will get better.
most important is the desperate need for a EDITOR !!!! bit of interesting story. I'm about 120chps in I would love to see this book through to its end .the bad Grammer and sentence structures make it hard to read
I only started this novel to get a free pass and I'm so glad I did it. Although I'm only on chapter 5 atm I think it has all the makings of a grand adventure. Keep up the great writing.
A great potential story good for some high doses of diabetes . u would recommend giving it a read it's heavenly . I loved it all the way in
As the author, you have to be confident in your own story.So, let me give you the gist. A young man meets a suspicious old man, who ends up adding him to a chat group connected to various people throughout the whole universe. With this, he hopes to write his and his companions names into history, and to never be forgotten.By the way, this is sci-fi and cultivation, so if you're looking for mechs, mech suits, battleships and all that stuff, you'r in the right place. And if you're looking for cultivation, complete with realms, systems of cultivation and fancy titles, you're also in the right place.Enjoy!
Is not worth it....... period .....
usseless for real...shield and sword for a healer... and nobody want healer team mate........................................................................
Great Story and would recommend to anyone that's look for a solid plot and world build. The story is also executed properly putting you into a loop of wanting more and more. Definitely a 5 star story.