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Controversial review: This novel is not a military novel. For it to be a military novel, there should be girls who turn into battleships or girls who turn into rifles. All in all, thoroughly disappointed.
Having read up to chapter 604 I felt that I should write a review.The most important part of sports novels is the world, there can be super unrealistic powers and abilities but if they are used in a world where it makes sense and it helps the reader feel like there is more than just the MC out there it really helps with immersion. This novel excels at making the reader feel like a part of the world, and it does not feel like we are at the centre of it, rather it feels like real life when you follow a player's journey to the top. It feels rewarding when Zachary performs well, and at times I feel the same feelings I feel when watching the Premier League, Bundesliga or any other league.Minor gripes with the characters are that some of them feel a bit like they are there to help the story move along, keep in mind that it is very minor and not noticeable most of the time, but it is still there. the MC Zachary also feels a bit too perfect in that no real person could have so much singular focus on football to such an extent, I see the author trying to use other characters to show the consequence of such a mindset (I won't say but if you have read then you know), but it's still not enough sometimes and Zachary still feels a bit robotic, however, I believe the author may rectify this as Zacahry is still young and he has time in his career. So I hope to see some character development for Zachary.I want to write more but this is already long enough so I will quickly say a few points.The buildup of his career was exciting to read and at times I felt like I was in the stands watching him>I usually read Sports manga so this novel was a very welcome change for me and I had no problems understanding what was going on.The store is a tad slow to start up but it is well-paced after Zachary's career takes off.I might have rated this a tad bit high but that's a reflection of my hope that this novel reaches even greater heights.Thanks for reading my rambly review I hope I didn't waste too much of your time.
Okay it's me again Author-san for my another review of the novel. Yes the updates are a tad slow and there's a lot of typos in the novel but it's still good. Just be careful with the typos and grammars, we don't want critism from others right? I don't know if you forgotten it but what happened to their original mission to find their parents? It seems the characters forgot it. Also I read about the flies in the story and so far they don't post a threat to our characters. I know you have a plan for them but maybe I can give a few ideas of mine. What if they are now the locusts of the new world? Yes they don't attack humans but what if they pose a threat to their foods? Like the food the fly touched spoils faster than normally? And when someone still eat the food they will be infected? Well flies are carrier of pathogens so it's a given. And these flies pose a huge threat to their agriculture? Unlike locusts they make the plants dead and dry by absorbing all their nutrients. Take a look maybe you can get something from it that you can use...Creature: Infected Fly - Ordinary housefly that undergo a mutation after feasting to many infected carcasses.Night rage threat: lowThreat level to human: LowThreat level to food and agriculture: HighStrength: Very Agile, can cause abnormal spoilage to foods and kill plants by absorbing their nutrients. IWeakness: they don't approach the place if there's a fire nearby. Ultraviolet rays can make the fly sluggish. Easy to kill especially at noon. Skill: The mutated fly only lives for 10 days due to the effects of the virus. But before it dies it lays an egg. Unlike the common fly that lays hundreds of eggs, the mutated fly only lay a single egg before dying.Creature: Larva of a mutated fly can only be seen during night or when the sun does not come up. Can be encounter during rainy days.Codename: SmasherEgg size: as large as an ostrich eggIncubation period: 72 hoursLarva size: after spawing from an egg = 40 cm Can grow up to 80-90 cm Threat level: medium to high depends in the sizeNature: Voracious eater. Eats anything. It smash the food with its body before eating it hence the name Smasher. (for easy digestion maybe?) Quick despite it's size. Can climb anywhere.Weakness: hates fire and very easy to burn. Very vurnerable during it's pupae periodTenacity: same like the HurlersSkill: after 2 days it forms its pupae. After 7 days the pupae will rupture, spawning 100 or more infected flies.My inspiration for the larva is the bullworm from the SpongeBob episode ?Hope this hel**
Man this is seriously one of the most engaging LN i've read. And i've read a ton of them. Some may argue that the pace is too slow, but if i find something to be one of the strenghts of your work is precisely that detailed build up. Keep up the good work, i'm a fan now.
I rarely write reviews, which already proves that a story worth writing one left a big impression (positive or negative). At this point I read 701 chapters and I don't regret a second of it. Writing quality: A comparrison to the Webnovel standard would just be wrong. In 700 chapters there are barely any gramatical or spelling errors. Updating Stability: 2 daily updates each with at least 2000 words and great quality. In the 2-3 Months since I caught up not a single update was missed. Bonus chapters are rare, which considering the already insane sceddule is not an issue.Character design: The characters are neither the most unique nor generic. What realy makes them great to me is their development and growth. Each main character gets enough spotlight and even sidecharacters are rarely forgotten. The development is rather slow without stagnating, making it natural and considering the slow pacing of the novel in general (not even 4 months after 700 chapters), this totaly makes sence. Another thing I like a lot is that the plotarmor is not too obvious/extreme, nor are the characters stupid for the sake of plot. Story development: As said before, the pacing is realy slow, which I personaly love. While MC becomes one of the strongest realy fast, the story manages to still be balanced and present good chalenges, without feeling forced. World background: A clear defined powersystem, a fantasticaly described world and a intriguing history, which gives room to theorize. All of that without logical errors. The system: Every living being has acces to the system, which is designed to help them, reach a better evolutionary stage. There are few elements to the system, which apear to be based on luck (i.e. loot orbs or skill scroles). Those are minor and not as luckdependent as they apear in the beginning.The community: I have yet to find another community as active and interactive as this one on webnovel, and by now I look foreward not only to the chapters, but the commentsection as well.Overall 6/5 easily the best webnovel I found so far and even my second Favorit book/novel/mange etc. in general.
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Tania keep it up, You have to show every that you are not weak at all, it's time to take revenge, my girl. .........
Very intriguing story
Very interesting
definitely one of my top three favs!!!
Muse NEVERRRRRR disappoints! So far this is a great read!