I did give you a first power stone so please do everything to make your story more appealing I will continue to support this story till then you must do your best good luck author.
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It is just a little too much with mentioning of no spiritual roots, we get it he has no spiritual roots just stop it, really annoying. other than that it's all good
Just because the main character is overpowered is no reason to gloss over the moments that make the main character relatable, since the main character is so OP. Instead of focusing on increasing the main characters abilities, flesh out who he is as a person and where he stands in the world. Have the main character reflect on what he has done instead of needlessly slaughtering to get what he wants. Epic moments need to be deserved, not thrown in for the sake of the act alone.
Is this the complete novel of DD1? I mean, I could just read... but man... come on... 500+ chapters just seems too long, you know what I mean?
god, this story is so bad that I just had to give it a 1 star reviewfirst chapter is a liestory is inconsistent as fdon't waste your time
PLEASE PUBLISH THIS ALREADY!!!!!!! Although I don't know the reasons for this novel to be dropped, I still believe that this novel should be given a second chance. So please start translating this again, I BEG YOU!
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Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
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Don't waste your time. The book is full of cliches. The story is based on WoW but a bastardized version. If you've read other MMO books then you've read this one. Ctrl C - Ctrl V but change the names a little and you have this book. It's not even trying to innovate. We also have the classic school reunion story where he got embarrassed in the past but this time he does face slapping.