It’s gooooooodSome parts of the translation are shaky but it’s free, so get over that. When it says government, read mistress. There’s drama, mystery, weak to strong FL. Overall strong female characters. The villains are complex and at times things a very grey (which I love). AND it not unnecessarily long.
Nice ? bro keep it up I'm with you and update regularly ..............................................................................................................................................................
Well, the mystery and the concept of the two main characters is very unique and promising. I also like the start and am looking forward to the next chapters.I hope the author updates regularly and I recommend everyone to try it.
First of all, I have to say that I thought the story was going to be good, but it feels great to see a work of this caliber. Please note that I am doing this novel review after 20 chapters.When blacksmithing is involved in any story, the story can already hook me and finding a story like this is enough to elevate the novel outline.The main character managed to attract me because he was quite interesting. Personally, I like to read about main characters with outstanding and incredibly evil personalities, so it is a good thing in my eyes to love such a main character.I can't say much about World Building, personally, I can't say much about it as I think it will unfold like tree branches as it progresses, after all, as I said, after reading only 20 chapters, I thought this story deserved a review.I couldn't help but smile, especially when I saw the message of Edward, the NPC we saw at the beginning, I hope we will be able to see more of him because the author gave him an interesting task and had him complete it in his first appearance.So, all things considered, it would be completely ridiculous not to give this novel 5 stars. Of course, this is my opinion.
Great story development is nice pacing. Everything is great. it's not my type of story, but i would advise anyone to give it a try.
This is an amazing novel especially world build up and magical workings of world. I also enjoyed various hot scenes of mc and heroines, our maids ?If I have to really nitpick then it would be that this novel has a bit too many ero scenes. Like reducing their quantity and adding more storyline would have been perfect ?Won't you continue this novel and reach finishing line? Because I feel we are quite close to end of journey and its very saddening to see incomplete masterpieces ??
A fresh concept in System fantasy. Curious to find out how Leo will leveup to God level and how he changes the world of his daughter. Definitely worth a read?
I’ve only read a few chapters, and I’m already hooked! This story has so much potential, and I can’t wait to see where it goes. Loving the drama and excitement
There are some slight misspellings, and I saw a few times that the words used didn't really fit the narrative. However, overall, it is a pretty good story.
just started reading webnovel a month ago so far so good.This novel is a new story for me.Keep up the good work.
This is my first novel that I have written as an author and I hope that I can get helpful reviews and suggestions as I continue to improve on it
excellent please continue to write. don't drop it