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I read 80 chapters in one go...really amazing..at first I was struggling with the naming of the characters and cities lol but soon I got hooked in the thrill of the story that keeps you on edge..the world seems very dark with alot of mysteries and you can't help but wonder how things work..the power system is not amazing and unpredictable but you can understand it as you keep reading..I thank the author for his creativity and for making the me experience the story as om part of it which is very rare to find here..So 5 stars deserved for this hidden gem..A highly recommended masterpiece..read and you won't regret
This novel is about Borrowing System, and this one is unique! The writing is easy to read, easy to understand and has an interesting plot that I came to like. The characters are likable and the flow of the narrative is awesome! The story development is in right pacing, not so fast and not so slow either. Overall, the story is entertaining, a page turner and makes me laugh. Above all a good read! Good job, Author! Keep it up!
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one of the best, great job author. keep it up, need more chapter a.s.a.p???????????????????????????????????????
I don't understand how this got past the voting phase, like it only has 8 votes………….........................................................
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Shameless Author Review here:I have enjoyed a lot of similar genre stories on this platform and with my background I felt the urge to put my own work out there. I am dedicated to putting out flawless chapters and if you locate any grammatical or spelling errors, please point them out and they will be immediately fixed.I am consistently working on creating a nice balance between chapter updates and will committedly release chapters on the daily. I wish I had put more work into the first chapters and published more than 1,000 words each chapter, I may go back and up their word count without adjusting the actual flow of the chapter. I maintained a minimum of 1k words per chapter up until chapter 30 at which point I raised it to 1500 and will not go below that. The story will continually be developed and follows Marcus and his adventures through a game that has much more going on behind the scenes than he had initially thought. The risks will constantly be increased as the story progresses and the novel becomes more fleshed out. I absolutely love creating characters and having them fill roles within the story. The cast shall be expansive and constantly growing and decreasing. I aim to have no two characters alike and want to have a nice variety in the main and supporting cast. I love adjectives and really enjoy growing the world around our cast and hope that shows through my work. I love world building and generating the setting that our characters are in. I really hope you guys enjoy the story and take the time to like, vote, and comment, I read every comment and am more than happy to reply to your questions. Feel free to join the discord to see more behind the scenes information and connect with fans.
seems interesting but what happened to the other pilot reads from last time they just never gonna get released are they webnovel word word word word word
I love how sci-fi and romance were both at play in this story. the writing quality was great, there were few errors but I love the play of words and the combination of poetry and prose within the writing style. it's beautiful. the characters and world background were also amazing. Overall, it is an amazing work of art. keep it up!
Okay here comes the great review of self proclaimed Master Blaster Plaster Trasher... Ugh... I guess I got a little self burn... Ahem Anyway here comes review after I read first five chapters.
Pros Of Novel:
1- The detailing of characters are great. Emma Fisher already became my Waifu and Alex and Ravi are best male characters. Lucy is still vaguely discribe but not every character can be discribed in just 5 chaps.
2- The plot is intriguing. All these things like it's futurestic yet there ain't much need to describe atmosphere is what makes reading iy convenient.
3- Till now, none of the chapter is anything boring. They piqued interest and were able to maintain that.(No even I can do that... I can't do anything though)
Now onto the Cons:
Well there ain't much maybe cuz it's beginning or maybe it's just that good but here are some suggestions.... Try to maintain world building. The surrounding the crowd and even tiny things like rooms and halls. Even though it looks like there ain't any need to do that now and story is interesting. If you suddenly started world building all at once, it will become hard as well as boring. So If yoh start doing it now irrespective of whether it's needed or not with interesting stories still there, I think it would help you in long run.
So Finally My 5 Start review cuz there ain't any flaws for now at leat.