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So far I like it, but like many of those New novels the update of chapters is a little slow. But it have a good backgroud, and the MC is op but not too much
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I don't usually write reviews because I don't know how to make one and have bad grammar, so I'll just write my opinion.I like the story and the MC, he's pretty unique on a different way. The story is quite slow phased but I like it that why, it makes the world building more detailed. You might sometimes be annoyed at the MC because he's not using his brain sometimes and a little bit childish, well for me it one of his good points, it made him different from the other MCs with edgy personality.This novel is definitely a gem, I can't wait it to be popular so it can have stable update and many chapters.Btw Author Luv U~♪
The synopsis looked interesting but I can't be sure how the book really would be.. so I started reading it and yep.. this is a good story alright... just go for it.. keep up the good work author..
I enjoy thrillers, so this is the niche for me. Much like D&D, our MC plays in a virtual world where actions or instances are determined by dice rolls. This creates a refreshing feeling of suspense and horror as even the reader is worried and when the dice will unexpectedly roll. The characters could be a little more in depth, but that is fine with the fast plot pacing. A recommended read.
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Definitely one of the better novels this week.Just like The Legendary Mechanic, the MC had played a VRMMORPG game that was globally popular. He was a plot finder and was well acquainted with hidden things.He was regressed to a few days prior to the games launch, and isekai'd into the body of a young noble in the VRMMO.He doesn't have a status screen or system so far, and his only cheats seem to be his knowledge. He can hand out quests to players. So far the plot says that his family is going to pretty much all die in a rebellion that has murky origins, so he has to find a way out of that. He's still young and there's a decade or so before the plot begins.It's alright so far, I was just hoping for a status screen similar to TLM.
It's a really great book even though it still has room for improvement the author makes up for it with effort. It's impressive seeing an author who builds up more than one Mc in a book. Good luck and keep it up. Grimfire out...