I'm So so MAD! fucking MC so So Sooooooo stupid what's the Use of shop function when you don't buy antidote???????? it's already at chapter 40+ and the fucking poison was not removed why are you so stupid? if I'm there I'll fucking kill the MC on the spot
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Recently, I have seen many movies about death games like 'Escape Room' and 'Squid Game', and so on, and this novel is really good if you are a fan of mystery and thriller in my opinion. And the male protagonist, Shade, is quite realistic to be honest and it honestly surprised me when he helped the old man though at first he was quite adamant on not helping the old man. Moreover, the grammer of this book is really good! All in one, this is a amazing novel for you to read :) Keep up the good work Author-Sama!
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Ooo the synopsis just pulls me right in.. I hate it when the MC's best friends turn against him when he will do well~Go Kila!! Fight for survival~
I find the story to be boring and heavy to read, its like a monotonous slice of life even as he is investigating a crime, there is no excitement in the way it is written
(chap.49) I am giving an honest review before I drop this story. I don't really know if you have a lot of mistakes in writing b/c my brain just makes it right for me if it isn't to bad, so you get a 5-star for decent writing. Stability of updates, well I found this when it had like 300 chapters already, so you get a 5-star for having a lot of chapters. Story Development....one word, slow, I could see if you wanted to start it off slow and let the reader get used to the dungeon system chakra ect but after chapter 40 I began seeing that this story would probably never speed up, my main reason for dropping, but you get a 3-star b/c I saw the effort at least, just too many unnecessary details, chapters, ect. Character Design, I have only seen what like 16 people, two adventure groups, bandit group + knight, Frost(mc) Maya(mc protector) Dark(god) Light(god) and like 3 other people, and I swear the adventurer group(first one) had more personality than the mc, they were just more fun(to me at least), Maya, I can't really say anything about her, she does nothing, she gets mad sometimes and gets embarrassed sometimes, that's it. Dark/Light god, don't really know anything about them, but that is okay for now, considering that they are gods, and Dark god so far is actually pretty decent. Maybe it was b/c I'm at chapter 49, but I would say take some time to get the main people of the story more depth and personality, I would give you a 2-star but since your a new author I will cut you some slack and give you a 3-star. World Background, something that can make or break your story, this is how I see it, you introduce us to this world that is suppose to be huge many species called Nova, then a few chapters later you dump us with information about where the mc is located all in one chapter and you basically don't really go over it again, at least up till chapter 49, all I really remember was he was in a mountain that had strong monsters the deeper you went, I honestly debated if I should have given you one star for World Background, but I went ahead and gave you a two since you did at least explain it in one chapter and went over albeit very little in later chapters. Don't get the wrong idea, I like the idea of your story and maybe I'll come back and read sometimes b/c at the end of things my entire life is reading, that's what I do for hours upon hours, and your story has a lot of potential, every story does, so keep working hard or don't really your choice, this is like my first real review of a story, so it's a bit long, but hope the authors sees this and tells me if it gets better later on.
This novel is better than the others. Interesting plot and character design....This novel is better than the others. Interesting plot and character design...
Very good, Nice characters, Almost no cliches, engaging worldbuilding ??Its a little bit slowpaced but that Isnt Mich of a problem.
This reignited my interest in mysterious cultivation worlds and a genuinely fun mc!!!Also the interactions seem so natural and romance is exactly the type that I’m looking for??????Keep doing an amazing job author!!!Hopefully more people get to see it and support this amazing work
An excellent novel. In modern times, cultivation is one of the best of novels. Its potential is very good. Its future is a deep story. Publishing speed is slow. I can't wait for new episodes.
I'd say this is really amazing, with the thrill of a new plot.I also love the settings and the way, the scenarios played out.the levelling up wasn't too excessive or too slow.?