JamesChronos
[Group][Blackheart]-You don't even know how to speak murloc! How do you know he called you a goat-face?
Though this novel has small no. of chapters, I already like it.Author give us more chapters. .
I really loved the beginning, the mc was cold, had a special background and wasn't stupid but then everything began to become sh*t when the shameless bunch appeared, they are extremely annoying:-first they just tried to kill him and steal his game. ->then mc just forgave them for no valid reason.-then they followed him and invited themselves at his home. ->mc again forgave them for no valid reason -then they were bold enough to look into his private stuff (while knowing his personnality). ->mc again forgave them for no valid reason-he tries to work but gets interrupted again ->but still forgave them for no valid reason Also the most annoying girl magically falls in love with the mc while having known him for less than a week. In the beginning you feel like mc's coldness and ruthless personnality is legitimate but then he just lets the shameless bunch do what they want and constantly gets pushed around by their behaviour and requests, while having massacred the kids who tried to kill him he tolerates worse people for longer for no reson, he is totally illogical, the plot feels too forced because of all of the inconsistencies in this story and it becomes total sh*t after that because of the annoying bunch.It just becomes too frustrating to read this when you see the mc getting pushed around by shameless people and not do anything to them while still agreeing to their shameless requests.Many will drop this like me because of this part of the story. It began real good but became total sh*t because of only 5 chapters.
This novel is a GEM. I wasn’t expecting much going in for a typical transmitigator story, so I have been completely blown away by the depth of the characters, thoroughly thought-out plot, and relatability. The story gradually increases in ridiculousness, but also meticulously keeps the plot tightly woven and engaging. Author, thank you for writing such a fun, cool, and riveting novel! I don’t want to reach the end, but at the same time I can’t wait to see how everything comes together
It was a seventh degree spell array. Difficult. The time was really too short. They said, once this job is done, he was free to go. Free from the labor and the contract, which bound him forever.
I felt like the book is worth reading . Actually I came here for an fp but I liked the story Looking forward to read till the end.
" it's gonna be fine"
I kinda started loving the story after the MC's father was side lined because of his righteous BS and I kinda like the MCs when they have that crazy side to them.Love the story so far?✌️
After reading the book I just couldn't help but write a review. Author, this book is AMAZING. I can't express how much I enjoy it. From characterization to the story line, you have done amazing on the story. And to top it all off, chapters 205-208 are amazing, I cried, and I do mean I CRIED. I truly hope that you will continue this book until it has passed 1,000 chapters
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There is no way people actually like this, it doesn’t even make any sense. The mc emotions and personality seem so unrealistic.
Later in chapter 13, the MC will become a slave or a subordinate, even though he has the power to become a ruler. Should have been able to explain this is not why I gave *1 ? .It's useless if the writing is good, the setting is cool, etc., if the plot is sloppy, bad.
