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I’ve been seeing a couple of reviews bashing the mc for being to cautious or not having the demeanor of an immortal cultivation and my reply to that is people like that won’ last a second in the cultivation world where a father can kill his child for talent or a mother can sell her child for benefits and keep in mind the mc has the biggest benefit that any cultivator chases that is eternal life, so yes he will hide and take his time, yes he won’t have the demeanor of an immortal cultivator and yes he is for sure not going to get himself killed and refined into a pill just so he can prove he is a big boy that everyone needs to respect and eternal life makes you a hermit by default because all those you care about will die and live you alone so excuse the mc for just chilling in the prison.Now for the proper review: the story is actua quite interesting and has an mc with a good head on his shoulder as well as a not so outrageous cheat which makes it all the more fun to read but the only problem I have with the story is the translation some words I have no idea what them mean because they are in Chinese and I just have to brush past it but I’ some chapters the translator provides the meaning at the end so that good…..well that’s the end of my review. Apologies if it is to amateur
You've successfully created a different reality, btw interesting one! The plot is captivating and characters are expressive, also descriptions of the backgroud are good, detailed. It looks from the beginnning that you already have a concept for the story as ALL!
The story seems to be good as of yet, the spelling errors are unrecognizable to my overly sensitive to errors brain. And the nice added in comedy is a nice touch. Overall the book is really good!
From what I've read, this novel and 'wartruck in the apocalypse' are the best novel from this batch.-This novel gives a world building feeling and war. Yes, war feeling. When you listen to war music or final boss music this can be pretty badass.-Anyone heard of sparta? The begin can be pretty confusing as the first 2 chapters are slight info dumps, but still pretty important to know.-Basically MC's start a newbie village with SPARTA! and greek infantry, basically he probably can gain any ancient troops.-World: Typical fantasy trope, trolls, gnomes, high elves and (huge pteros, sort of winged dinosaur) - mc's background is basically the lord of his own territory that suddenly popped up in the new world, he gain population by accepting refugees who are spartans, greeks ect.-MC's intelligence is above average, at least knows how to make a good kingdom (town for now)-Translation: Good-Guys? LET'S HAVE SPARTA!
This is a good story and the pace is very good. Read it for what is a story, not your personal made up event. i get tired of poeple telling authors how to write their story. This is a awesome read and should be getting more hype. Two thumbs up and keep it going Author-sama…. Oh ya drinks on me served by her. Back off buddy, she is MINE. LOL starts fist fight just because a little brawl always make the drinking better.
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Nothing to be said, this is an alt account. Am I being shameless reviewing my novel twice? Yes! Yes I am.But this novel is awesome.......I think, so read it! Please ???
I love reading this novel. As an online player of 16years, I too love gaming! This novel really a great find for gamers like me. I wish there's more free ads to watch so I can save some spirit stones. It's so expensive just to read, and I just bought another ss just to read the new updates since I spend a lot already because I have tons of novels in my library that I'm reading as well...
An interesting book for sure it’s has game mechanics like many books on this site, but unlike others it has interesting characters that bring vibrancy ,and color to the book. it is an excellent read for anyone who loves fantasy worlds. I hope it continues with he same quality.
It seemed interesting then I looked it up on mtl sources to check how long this actually went or if it was dropped by the main author... anyways this entire novel is 251 chapters long and is completed. I'd like to end this review with 251 characters