Well, I will be shameless enough to give my book 5 stars, the story follows the growth of Maximus with all his imperfection. It shows how he matures slowly trough the story. Because let's be honest all humans make mistakes and all humans have to grow slowly learning from their own mistakes. Through the book you will see him not only becoming stronger but also wiser. Losing friends, making new ones, fighting evil, being evil. Exploring the world and enjoying life to its fullest.
Story, very, very nice. Characters very good. Suspense, is very happy. I want read more. I invite people to read too. Promise you be happy and excited too. reader want many chapter. Thank you
Okay so. I like the idea of the apocalypse (in story form) but you seriously need to make a better language edit before you post it. The character is good and I see potential so good luck!! And hope to see more chapters from you.
Mano me fazer ler isso foi obra do INIMIGO! Como uma historia tão perfeita não foi pra frente. Meu deus do Céu, como o mundo é injusto! Esta sem duvidas entraria no meu top 3 melhores Fanfics da Marvel.
There is not a lot of world building still(till chapter 40) and the charcters don't feel relatable. Mc is annoyingly stupid at times and it is kinda generic system story without much details
Very interesting story, and the characters are very comic. I think the story develops a little slowly, but it's fun like that. I think this is one of those comic stories like Library of Heavens path, the character is overpowered in a way and I think he'll be over soon. I don't understand why he didn't get a cheat ability from the start, I think he would be more confident than the kkk cat. The fact that he transmigrates does not have much influence on history, it is just a cover for him to be experienced and of course has the games, which reminds black tech internet cafe system in a way kkkkkk.
A very good book that has a lot of potential. However, the first three or four chapters have some visible grammatical mistakes. After that everything clears up. Really looking forward to more chapters!
This is really good fanfiction hope you can come back soon.
This new version much better than the old one, Chen Li didn't become as heartless as before, and that's a good change.
It seems interesting, but there are many arcs the same as other novels, such as a 5year duel contract with a princess of the sea race, the valley of frozen beasts, the multi-tailed tanuki pet/lover etc
The book has a lot of potential at forty chapters. The main character has a decent head. The descriptions are good and so is the quality of writing.
Too many grammatical errors and passages that did not have coherent words. Pronouns are used wrong but that is expected when the story is translated. So enough with the bad, I cant spoil the story so the MC is interesting. He seems to be living a double life. One life is good while the other is horrible. But he does not enjoy either one. He can't be really happy. But it is interesting to see that he is making the best of his situation. He may be overpowered but this power can not make his situation better until later on! Great start would rate higher, but I have my reservations.