Review Swap! Sorry it took so long.Writing: 4/5Wow, nice writing! I barely saw any grammar slip ups, but a little proofreading could benefit the story. Also, great job keeping the tense consistent. It is rare to read a story in present tense. Sadly, its not really my cup of tea. I prefer stories told in the past tense, solely because I find it easier to read.Update Stability: 5/5No complaints here. I'm impressed you've been writing since last year!Story Development: 4/5The plot is interesting and has potential. I'm interested to see which direction the story is gonna go.Character Design: 4/5The MC can be a bit OP and his personality a bit arrogant, but I want to see how he will grow throughout the story. More imagery could be used to describe the characters though. There are a lot of names, but not enough description for me to imagine how they look.World Background: 4/5The world is interesting, but I'm curious, does this take place in modern times? Future? Where did these "Damn" come from? What are the Damn Hunters? I have a lot of questions about the world. More explanations would be helpful. Hopefully it will be described more as the story progresses.Overall, this story has potential. Keep up the good work!
This novel is from author of Warlock of magus world and carefree path of dreams, so you can expect logical, rational, smart and cautious mc. As author took inspiration from LOM so world building is pretty decent.....Similar to author's previous work, main character seems to lack romantic feeling.Focus of the novel is mostly on fighting and the MC's journey through the ranks with the help of some kind of cheat.If you enjoyed author's previous work then chances are pretty high that you will enjoy this...btw use coins to unlock at least 1 chapter to be counted as 'Fans' so they'd be pick this up quicker.
Good stuff this. Though, it hasn't been updated for a month. Hopefully the author for comes back to this to finish it up. Apparently my review isn't enough characters long yet. Let me try to post again.
The first chapters just terrible but it rapidly picks up after that. The premise of the storys a lot of fun as well presenting an unusual take on the dungeon core genre.
Isn't this novel already translated up to 100 something chapters ?. I remember reading it on xianxiaworld. Translating again from beginning is such waste of time.
Another one of this horrible chek in novels . Mc wants to be low-key but is often does stupid things to get attention. Cultivation is very vague and will probably be one of those that have infinite hidden ancestors and powerhouses. Endless peerless beauties everywhere.
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Look at me, I'm the captain now!I might not look like it, but I love crabs. And for that, i will do whatever is necessary to get what I want.
author have u made changes in the novel,bcoz when i first read it till 1200 chapters a few months back it's different as i am starting to read from the start now
MORE PET NOVELS!!!! AND ITS A COMEDY!!!!!!AND THE NAME OF THE MC IS THE SAME WITH THE MC OF MDDYA!!!!AND ITS ALSO A COMEDY!!!!HECK YEAH!!!!!
Although I’m not a big fan of apocalypse novels, I do like zombies and undead stuff especially necromancy eh I’m getting off topic anyway I recommend this novel I tried it as a heck but I actually liked it so do try and give it a shot.I’m an author myself and I know that shadow strives for improvement so if u can do help him, he will always ask for it I know that for sure.
[ONLY MINOR SPOILERS]Fully caught up so I think I am finally eligible to write a review.Currently by far one of the most well written novels I have read so far out of all the novels I have read. Very logical story progression and no stupid decisions made nor indescribable luck. The story pans out very well and kept my attention the whole time. I never really lost interest and finished catching up after a few days of reading and now actively wait on updates.Skip this part if you don't live in the US. As a reader that currently lives in the US, more specifically florida. I really enjoy how I can actually relate to the locations listed in the novel and not only just get a general feeling for them like other novels I have read that take place in china or the future.However that isn't to say that the novel has no flaws. Everything has a flaw somewhere however the flaws in this novel are only minor flaws that just feel out of place. Only a minor spoiler here so if you don't want any skip the rest of this paragraph. The MC eventually is able to fly and can fly from florida up to NY in 6 hours if I recall correctly. That's 179 miles per hour (approx.) Still that is pretty fast just to be flying as a single person in the sky.All in all, I highly recommend this novel to anything looking for books that have a logical progression and a great story while you are at it. However this novel is not for snowflakes as there is a great deal of brutally that the whole world takes part in, each continent having its own view. That is all I am going to say here, if you want to know more maybe you should just read the novel. It is relatively short at the point I am posting this only being at chapter 93, the end of volume 2. Well, I go on for a while and am bad at endings, so I'll just leave it here. Goodbye reader.