Here to support a good fellow author and friend on his new book. I haven't read it completely yet, but it does seems to be quite good, it has a constant pace, with almost no breaks, a strong minded and smart main character, and interesting side characters. Grand Void Daoist is already quite experienced in writing Webnovels, so I'm sure he won't dissapoint you with the usual boring cliches, or weak minded, pathetic main characters either. He knows his sh it
A good read a few grammar mistakes overall good read..................................................................................................................................................................
这是一本好书，这是一本很棒的书，我喜欢你的小说，永远不要停止写作，作者你是最好的书
man, i just wanna clarify things before reading any further..I'm stranded currently at chap 40 and all the novel showed was...how awesome, beautiful, and generous all the powerful women are and how stupid, pathetic and brain-dead all the powerful men are..how awesome the system is and how large our mc is dependent on the system and the women..how 60 percent of chapters could be filled with info abt a skill, testing the skill and all the backstories for every little things..and how often the mc tries to show him as a human who always takes the right decision and gives some justification for his every action,,like come on man, i get he is a goody two shoes to almost any women from the beginning already..may i know if he starts acting like any normal boy would in these situations and becomes independent once he becomes an adult?
"Writerz-Writerz."
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Immortal
Reeling, Jahn staggered out through the crowd, people blurring into an amorphous mass, pressing in onto his consciousness. He struggled to keep on his feet, like a ship listing on a wave. The cobblestones of the street lurched up to meet him. His head seemed to make a hollow sound as it struck them. He staggered to his feet, blood dripping from his temple. He struggled through the glares of the people around him, rushed madly into depths of the crowd.
Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play
Fed to the rules and I hit the ground running
She tugged her knees over to her chest and she embraced her legs like a sweet girl in the middle of a thunderstorm hoping that everything would quiet down. She had no strength left to fight, she even buried her fingers deep into her cheeks to force herself to smile. The thought of her being powerless loomed over her like a blanket of chains weighing her down and with that, the tiled floor beneath her body started to crack.
Well, the years start coming and they don't stop coming