Interesting read but there are a number of chapters missing around chapter 25 or so. One minute the MC is the forest and the next he is in a city completing a quest with some new female.I also notice it is on hold for now, so I’m guessing the author has perhaps abandoned it and not fixed anything.Still it started to look good then faded out to mediocrity with no responses from the author.
story was going fine and was enjoying him building his own town but then the fiancé is introduced, and it felt like the whole story was ruined. everyone finds her perfect and it instantly becomes forced and unbearable quickly.why im dropping.1st his fiance is also a reincarnated.2nd he is already what feels like the peak of ability.3rd he is 10 years old and he is introducing cars trains, electricity and more to the world in what i believe has only been less than a year.4th everyone instantly becomes dumb around the mc and none find anything odd when he pulls the impossible out his ahh.5th similar to reason 3 everything feels super rushed and forced plot, romance, dialogue. ... maybe come back to check out future chapters if anything changes in a year but doubt it.
What happend, Why did the chapter get removed?!
This is a good novel so far, above average for the genre in my opinion except for one problem that I have. I think the conflict developing with the military is a bit dumb. My first issue is, why would the military behave this way? I understand the mc, in my mind he’s basically a feral animal right now, he feels cornered by the world and like he can’t trust anyone but Charlotte, it’s really good and I’m enjoying it a lot. But this military thing could have played out a lot better, firstly we already know the doctor is working with the military as an informant right? So instead of kidnapping his sister like a bunch of idiots and 100% guaranteeing an antagonistic relationship with a future power house, all they had to do was tell the doctor to tell Arthur “I’m sorry but our treatments are not working, with the current technology and medicine that we have your sisters prognosis is approximately 4 weeks. However if you are interested, I have a friend in the military and they have some advanced treatments that could give her more time or be more effective in treating her, if you want I could talk to them for you. I have to tell you though, I’m only saying this because I can see you are a beta tester, this isn’t an opportunity you can buy with money or influence, I don’t know how strong you are but the military is looking for exceptionally strong beta testers. You would have to prove to them that you are worth the effort and investment but if you are strong and show your value, I am positive that they will at the very least be able to give you’re sister more time.” Any military tactician would have approached it more like this, the doctor is already an insider, instead of doing stupid stuff this would have made Arthur hungry for their help, he would be scared and not trusting but with no other choice he would go them and to make sure he doesn’t lose out on the chance to save his sister he would show them more of his power. Now there’s lots of ways to tweak this to make them fall out later and become enemies, have misunderstandings or whatever if you still want conflict to happen. But to me this is would have been a much smarter approach from the military and makes a lot more sense. Still loving the story so far though!
Love it. Definitely something to be recommended.
i swear I love this book...the plot has potentials, can't wait to read more chapters.Highly recommend for those who love modern fantasy.
i love this one, hope you get contracted soon so i can support you with a castle
It completely unrealistic for technology to work in cultivation worlds because of differences in world laws I mean if a nuclear weapon will only be used junk of metals ther or do you expect cultivation techniques to work on earth with no spiritual energy? Well I’ll check it first the author have good ideas of this novel I hope the author will make things more realistic !
I'm loving this story, please don't stop.
this book is wonderful.it makes me just want more
As of ch 49 I am throughly enjoying the novel. It’s hard to find a good kingdom building novel but this one scratches that itch. Atlas, the Mc is kind, tenacious and reliable. I’ve enjoyed watching his character progress from observing fights to actively training in harsh environments and fighting above his level. While I am a bit disappointed that he uses a spear, I do hope he’ll use some magic in the future.Galanteo does a great job bringing all the characters to life. The teams’s reactions to Mira have me crying laughing ??. I know the author has fun writing those scenes. My favorite characters are Mira and poor Milo. Hopefully he integrates with the rest soon ??.I’m only just starting so I can’t say anything about update stability, but if we base it off of legendary broken player, we shouldn’t have anything to worry about. There are slight hints of romance, probably a sisterhood in the future. (Do it ?) The fight scenes are just long enough to be satisfying but not too long that I have to skip chapters. All in all, if you enjoy kingdom building, fantasy, romance and comedy, you should check this novel out. As always, great job author ???
I am new to writing novels so please wrtite reviews to point out my mistakes or things iIneed to improve on