yes but each chapter is divided into countless (+15) which enormously increases the total number of chapters
Yihi is so fucking annoying
Ayo
Faltan bastantes capitulos y voy por el cap 200. De repente, esta en medio de una pelea o una conversacion y en el siguiente, ya ha terminado y te quedas sin saber que ha pasado. Aunque ya haya finalizado espero que puedan recuperar los capitulos perdidos o faltantes.
There are positive and negative parts of this novel.It is easy to read and mostly also fun to read.From the beginning the story was a little to fast and got till the end to slow.Most of the translator notes were just in the way.The ENDING: just utter trash!!!!!!!!!!!! If the author didn't want to write anymore, he should have dropped it instead.That terrible ending made me forget the fun I had while this novel. Truly disappointing.
Hi, I'm loving your book - it's a true gem! Are you planning to release an updated edition or explore new ways to share your work with even more readers
Great story line, like the main characters introduction. It is also interesting to see the story develop. I am eager to read the next chapter when it comes out. I am hoping it is soon. Thank you.
i love this book and I really hope it continues . good job writer keep up the amazing work as I have loved binge reading all this in 2 days.
deserves to be continued (better than most other trail novels)In Doane’s debut novel, a young man embarks on a journey of self-discovery with surprising results.An unnamed protagonist (The Narrator) is dealing with heartbreak. His love, determined to see the world, sets out for Portland, Oregon. But he’s a small-town boy who hasn’t traveled much. So, the Narrator mourns her loss and hides from life, throwing himself into rehabbing an old motorcycle. Until one day, he takes a leap; he packs his bike and a few belongings and heads out to find the Girl.ignore this:
Oque eu dizer o LordInsanity já disse, então é só ler o comentário dele. Basicamente todo mundo passa por cima do MC. O único problema da obra pra mim é o MC.
Ive read chapter 102 and i think something is wrong with luke, I wonder if perhaps he might actually be an even older primordial than nyx and Gaia maybe he might be the Chaos primordialAs with all the hints author been giving i feel my guess might be correct
Do not be confused by this 3*I would have no problem recommending someone this book. Is this a "must read"? no I wouldnt say so. There are some key moments that the author kinda seems to skip over which leads to a kind of confusing plot and character development. However I wouldnt be surprised at all if this author was writing 4 or 5 star material by his next novel or even this one. He/she gets a lot of things right in my opinion.Heres more specific feedback1. I wish I could see the character changing, instead of the end results. I kind of missed the specific moments where he evolves emotionally, then I get told later that it did. 2. The perspectives of the different characters do a lot here. Its completely underutilized in other novels and I cannot express how much I appreciate it. It helps me understand how the character is influencing the world around him. Thanm you author. 3. emotional extremes. kick him while hes down, hype him when hes supposed to win. While I think its been going fine so far, imo it could be taken a step farther. That one could totally be personal preference though.