At the moment there are too few chapters to give a proper review but it is enough to say a few things.The quality of the writing is quite good, everything is understood at the level that it is easy for the reader to imagine the situation ... although in the future it would not be bad to gradually increase the amount of details in certain situations.The idea of the story can be considered cliché, but for the moment it has not strayed from the path, it can become a jewel, and not necessarily hidden ... but due to the lack of chapters and development of the plot many things can happen.The development of characters, and that of the world, are in the initial stages, a presentation. And in my opinion the background should be as good as those who act in it.I have high expectations, but I have not yet formed a critical opinion on the story.I just hope it doesn't involve NTR or that nasty stuff, you know, some things are just fetishes. I have no problem with the MC being a GOD OF KILLING, in fact it could be part of his essence, but I cannot tolerate some abnormal fetishes as an avid reader. Without offending of course.In the future I will do something more detailed, so I will be looking forward to this not being abandoned. The story has potential, and I hope it is not poorly executed. Thanks!
Weel I am still reading the novel and will constantly update my review. First of all the Mc is way to dumb. Second he gets strong unreasonably like he has no experience in shooting with a bow and an arrow so the first time he uses on he gets all his shots one after the other with almost no time between the shots.
Exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp expExp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp expExp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp expExp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp expExp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp
Hey author-san, good book you have here. The story is really captivating and has a lot of potential for future chapters. However you seem to prefer uploading on wattpad. Please don't forget us webnovel readers here ? . Do upload soon. Fingers crossed ? you'll find your writing motivation quickly. Good luck.
RAW NAME???....................................................................................................................................
$115,500 for the Best Adventure Novels! + Get Hardcover PublishHey Writers! Come to check out this adventure novel writing contest! This contest is mainly looking for four genres: Fantasy, Urban, Game, and Sci-fi, but if you haven’t worked on these genres, that’s TOTALLY FINE! You can refer to the given examples and tips to develop a new story. As all new stories can get cash rewards, this might be your chance to begin your writing career and start to make a living by writing! Not to mention that you can take your chance to win the big cash and get your books published in hardcover! For more information, you may visit: https://bit.ly/3tBG7l7or contact [email protected]
It started as ok, purely fantasy and the world building is so good I started binge reading but this purely my opinion, I read novels to escape from reality but this novel bring in issues and controversies from real world, except that the rest of the novel is 5/5This novel is very unique and I haven't found one same as this, the MC is just perfect but It's not fun for readers to have their characters filled with real world issue
When I started to read this novel then I thought this mobile is interesting so I read all the way to new latest 81th chapter. So that's why I'm gonna give this novel 5 star rating. Because it's good
The writing is decent, the updates seem consistent, story development is alright and there are decent characters. The world building also seems OK. Honestly if you like some what JP-anime vibe story then give it ago. There is nothing that seems wrong, but the character of the MC and the side characters were rather annoying often. Plus the whole thing about everyone keeping things from him isn't my cup of tea and him not remembering things after major events. Plus the whole chapter of talking to himself about how he will not do something only for him to that exact thing at the end was annoying as well along with half of his self talk. All in all, if you are a fan of the genre give it a read and decide for yourself, it has its upsides, it wasn't my cup of tea, but it could be yours.
I haven't gone far with the book... but it's awesome?. The storyline, the characters especially the so-called "God". Very amazing book from an amazing writer ??
This is actually an amazing story. I hope this gets picked. This is the type and quality of stories I want to see. It’s Been awhile since Webnovel and given us something like this
Great story so far! I absolutely love the humor and non-sensical situations that have presented themselves throughout the story randomly! The characters are real, you feel the reality of who they are and why they act the way they do. Reminds me of dungeons and dragons!