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Cannot believe that rape is so downplayed in this book. This book downplays this horrendous act and uses it as a force to get two people together. Their prior interactions were borderpoint hatred and because one act they are "forced" together(take responsibility). I cannot continue to read this story with such a forced romance taking place in a book that I mainly read for the action.
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okish novel.... better than many translations, but goes downhill after chapter 30 where he is trying to act some sort of hero or instead of simply selling codes goes and wastes 10 chapters or more in city. He should be busy training, farming skill points , lvling up and collecting rare codes. Things happene for MC's convince and 30% of novel feels like filler ......
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It’s good.
This book is unique in its right. What I admire the most is the eccentric writing which I noticed since its in stark contrast to mine.Writing Quality: Its great. I find myself able to follow the story and even the more specialised terminology well because its presented quite well.Character Design: I sorta feel that it's lacking a bit, not in the sense of development but purely design. I'm heavily biased towards visualising my characters and I feel like I don't get enough of that.Story Development: it kinda stunted for him in some of the chapters, but then went back to a great flow. Overall its good.World Background: As far as I've read is great and keeps building up with the mechanics as well.Overall great story that I recommend to readers.
I said that I would read two chapters in a day, but I couldn't control and brought myself to read chapter 3. It's suspenseful! Larry is so calm and unaware of all that's happening and I feel so bad for him. Also his teddy bear gives me the creeps. I have a feeling that his teddy is somehow dangerous, not really sure, but that's how I feel about Garry.
I really enjoyed how the author make this story, how the author shape the world of this story and how the author create nice pace on the plot.
The setting seems to be pretty cool and I am quite interested about the world of your story. You did great with writing the king as he is a very hateable character and the system seems to be pretty interesting. Although I got to admit that the dialogue feels kind of iffy at times.All in all, I would say that this is story has potential. Keep up the good work!
seems interesting. it's sort of like a check-in novel but with more interaction with the world in the early stages. not sure why they ended the preview at 38 chapters instead of 40 though.
For what it is, this is a funny as well as well thought out story. The main character has development and evolves as he goes through the trials of surviving his escape from the dungeon and learning how to free himself from his contract as an undead. This was a great idea to take the dungeon and bring it out from the Undeads point of view.