imo its better this way since the mc is a crazy and unpredictable person. it adds to the feeling of him being actually crazy and a lunatic. If we knew what was going on in his mind it would take away from that.
Well, what do i expect from a JP LN's MC. A fucking push over. 'oh i want to stay lowkey so they others will not know that I'm a high human.' Then the next fucking minute he'll start flexing his cards, coins, etc. Plus he'll help some fucking strangers who he just met a moment ago and derailed from his main objective. Currently on vol 6/7. I have high expectations, but I came back disappointed. We'll most people who know the MC talks about how 'cold' he is and he's the 'god of death'or something. But like any other JP MC's he can't even get a grip when he's alone with schnee (classic JP when the MC is not used to be alone with a girl and always stutter).
For me this one is way to formally written novel every chapter feels like they are using Koren Respectful speech while in other novel it is only in guild military or office conversation which have respect speech. It gets pretty boring with that kind of conversation flow.
Such a good novel, a pity.
It was nice and the beginning was intriguing
I can't say much since I dropped it around chapter 50, but before chapter 40, the novel is fantastic! You get a decent amount of action and information, so everything knits together great. The only reason I made it to chapter 50 is that after chapter 40, it seems like the translation went from being translated by a human into edited mtl. There's a lot of text I don't understand, and the book doesn't give context into it, as well as mixed up pronouns such as calling a female he and a male she, making it so you have to use your brain each time you see this. There are also missing quotation marks when a character talks, so you don't know they're talking until you're halfway through their speech. If this novel gets translated after chapter 50, I will start reading it again.
The Kingdom Building series presents a captivating storyline, but there are certain aspects that require further clarification and development. Allow me to address your concerns regarding the plot:Arquebus:The lack of explanation regarding barrel production and the manual manufacturing of arquebuses raises questions about the feasibility and efficiency of such processes without advanced machinery or smelting techniques.Cannons:The absence of a comprehensive explanation regarding the creation of cannons, especially cast iron cannons, leaves uncertainty about the availability of necessary resources, such as coal, for their construction.Gunpowder:The origin of saltpeter, a vital component of gunpowder, is not adequately addressed in the narrative. It is essential to establish a believable source of saltpeter and sulfur for sustained large-scale ammunition production.Steam Engine:While the introduction of a steam engine is intriguing, the story lacks details about its creation and the protagonist's ability to manufacture precise parts without access to machine tools or advanced engineering techniques.Blackout:The abilities and capabilities of the Blackout group, particularly their exceptional infiltration skills, may seem overly powerful and not fully explained within the context of the medieval setting.Russell:The abrupt transformation of Russell from a peaceful painter to a murderer lacks proper character development and motivation. It would benefit the story to establish dissatisfaction or conflicts within Russell's life before depicting him as someone capable of such actions.Travel:The ease with which characters traverse between different countries without established roads raises questions about the feasibility and time constraints involved. Additionally, the annual meetings of Blackout members, requiring extensive travel, seem logistically challenging in the absence of efficient transportation systems.Overall, while the Kingdom Building series offers an engaging plot, there is room for improvement in providing more detailed explanations and addressing the logical and technical aspects of the depicted time period and technological advancements.
Thanks for the chapters...Please don't abandoned this story. I love your work. More update ?more power. God bless you.
The new thing for me reading this impressive novel, I started to like system novels is how sophisticated a program is to shape the hero to be strong. Great imagination, keep it up!
They told me to follow my dreams, so I turned around and continued to sleep. ?............................................................
sadly it is so badly Written/Translatet it realy is a shame . the Speech with the "...." makes no Sense and you get 0 clue what a Person is saying .Sorry mate maybe rewrite or use Better Translator
It’s not really that good tbh. The idea is that he gets a system thaf lets him buy guns and genetic modifications in exchange for gold. It’s not that amazing of an idea and he even tells a family dozens of times stronger than his about his items and somehow doesnt get totured for info?