Great novel. Only issue is doesn’t have enough chapter releases, which us odd conaidering how much potential and its already a great novel.
"you can't see me heh"
Really really good cultivation story one of my most favorite, I wonder every chapter what next realm there will be and there is some side stories like skymender arc, while it’s a little long I think the author is just experimenting and it is well written so it doesn’t really affect reading experience, keep up the good work author !
Okay, I've written about 145 chapters as of writing this, and it's time I update my initial review.Firstly Writing Quality: Once again, I'm not native, but I feel I've done a decent job. The grammar isn't superb, but its readable, to the point where people can still enjoy reading.Stability of Updates: Ooof, well my update stability has been horrible for the past few weeks due to other projects. But I'm back on track. Hopefully you guys see my new novel come up on your recommends.Story Development: I've taken a slow pace approach at writing, and its paying off. There's a sense of gratification in the later chapters, seeing all everything coming together. I'm also proud of the plotlines I've implemented. If you follow along, you can see there is an overarching plot, and small scale plots. Things become very exciting past chapter 120.Character Design: Suprisingly, I'm more impressed with the side character then the main character. Not to say that the main character is bad, he's just somewhat inconsistent at times, as I sometimes forget what his background used to be. But all his mishaps can be explained, though to be honest, it mostly because I'm still an amateur. As for mt favourite character? Conspiracist leafling.World Background: 6/5 I'm very proud of the world I've built. Quite unique, type of stuff you can't read anywhere else. The only race you will know of are the humans, and maybe Fae, apart from that, you're in for a treat.
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A lot of authors write something like: Hey shameless author here im rating my book 5 stars blablabla. Sorry to disappoint I'm not shameless (i think) it's called promotion, and i do really believe my book deserves 5 stars, if you agree or think otherwise do leave your comment, i will read them all be it good or bad, i appreciate every critique, flaming on the other hand is ill advised, i can use voodoo so beware :creepygrin: I do hope you all enjoy this book as much as i enjoyed writting it!
Balanced pacing. I don't feel bored yet I don't feel exhausted. I just hope that there would be more chapters uploaded soon. Thank you. Congratulations author!
The idea is promising but a few touches need to be made.1. More paragraphs: Few paragraphs make the work a little overbearing to read so please give paragraphs at most after three to four sentences.2. Spacing: At the end of certain sentences, there are no spaces giving no difference between the end of a sentence and the beginning of another. Overall, the plot is nice but it needs some editing.Keep up the good work by the way. Writing isn't easy
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ummm... good review good review good review good review good review... ah yes and the song Gunter, why did you gunt my fries?I gunted them, and they were mine.What kind of gunt gunts his Gunter's fries,And doesn't even gunt him in the eyes?Gunter, there were tears there.If you gunted them, would you even care?Gunter, do you even love me?
I am so engrossed in this book. Really, it is so amazing and I particularly like thr plot. Keep up the good work, author. ?????????
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