MohammedChota
Just poorly executed and OPMC right off the rip nothing soecial or good here it's rushed and poorly thought out he gets 3 wishes and 1 is Master of ALL talents and immediately ruins any interest in the fic by building a AI right off the bat nah I'm out this is gonna be a jumbled mess and I'm not sticking around to watch the Dumpster fire burn
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I was strolling through and saw this book, this is my best book so far, Author keep up the good work ?
this is the bestest story in all of webnovel?
I read 10 chapters in just one day!!. ?
I can't read it anymore. but everyone of you should read this, and tell me aallll about it.
I liked the story in the beginning even considering the whole son-in-law plot but these following chapters just ruined everything, like how can he get back together with that Hailey, seriously the dude caught them in a hotel in a room and just like he has forgiven her, well this just made me give up on the story
.... Why do 5hey mess up so good ideas.....anyway it could be good... But i think it can be abadoned around 50/100chapter cuze its gonna be go tsrd... Very big.........
I feel uncomfortable reading this novel, I understand that the MC has some problems to empathize or maintain stable relationships, almost as if he did not have common sense (it is my understanding of the MC so far), but it is repetitive and boring, it has a kind of system +1 point of interest, but it is suffocated by the normal world and its mundane problems, I do not feel special emotion towards the novel, the MC is oblivious to the reader, only his superficial thoughts are mentioned and we do not know why the MC reacts or acts differently forms in various occasions, sometimes he is proactive in helping (example: when he helped his internship partner) and sometimes he is passive (his partners leave him after losing interest or the MC acts "weird") there are not many examples because information is lacking about the MC and his life. Summary, the novel has nothing flashy or anything that calls my interest, I can only qualify it as a casual reading. (He has a system we expect some action, hot blood or a new world, it is boring to read about a man who acts "normal" despite having a system, I say the norm of the system is to have adventures or do something interesting) (Google translator)
Now that the first volume is finally over, I decided to make this to give an overview about what you should expect.The story follows Leo Lock, a reader that everyone on this app could probably relate to(even if a little), as he slowly uncovers what it means to be a ‘reader’ from the very center of the novel itself.While he isn’t exactly a top of the world genius, Leo falls within the range of smart mcs. He utilizes his knowledge about the novel and common tropes alongside his upgraded ‘reading’ to change his standing within the novel, obtaining certain benefits as he does so. Although this might seem to be an overdone concept at this point, it should have its own unique points.Finally, though you will have to read to understand how it works in this novel, this is an ‘infinity’ novel. Hope you find it enjoyable if you do read, and feel free to ask any(spoiler free) questions in the comments.
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This is great make more please ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
In this story you get the overpowered character quality while also having interesting characters and reactions to the main character! The story is also coherent so far! It's really good. My only gripe is the constant pov changes which I strongly dislike. It makes it confusing as to who I refers to if you happen to forget the one line at the beginning refers to.
It looks like a good novel but the only thing I'm concerned about is if it id going to be one of those ones where he eventually turns into a human coz those are quite annoying.
