2 certain paragraphs... were ? but the transition of situations in the story is very much intriguing.. the mystery I liked the most and I am excited to read the next chapter.??
Came from tiktok as a big fan of this guy, read the novel and as a guy who's been writing novels here for almost an year now, I can definitely say this is better than 80% of what this platform has to offer, a very good job at it.Something I would say not as a criticism but as an advice from someone who's experienced on this platform, is the title. It isn't bad. It's actually quite good.Though WN favors clickbait titles like I'm the strongest and others so that's that.Besides that, great job fr
interesting and you can visualize the story as you read on
Another thrilling ride from author GemNoir, let me quickly my popcorn and hop on the ride, Gem never disappoints.Hop in guys, you won't regret it.
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Loving the story so far. MC is funny. The system is funny as well. Male lead is intriguing. Can't wait for more.
Love it, great idea. Takes the classic isekai trope and gives it a fresh/unique spin with 1 question that every reader has thought of at least once:“What if I could go back and forth between the 2 worlds?”Keep the chapters coming. This story needs/deserves a proper story arcs and an ending/epilogue.
Read till ch.19 , it's going good ....there aren't any grammatical errors, story is going in a good pace not too fast and not too slow....characters feel realiastic and not 2D.overall, waiting for new chapters
Now this is what I call a masterpiece!! I'm very picky when it comes to fantasy books but this book has gotten me hooked and I can't get enough of it.
I'm addicted to the anime solo leveling and it's a blessing that the sequel of such a great anime is accesisibl. thank you to everyone who made it possible
I juzt got done reading chapter 676 and I have to say this book is still as awesome as ever!!! There r still a couple things that I think the MC should do and I put them in the comments in this newest chapter!!! So I hope the Author looks at them and reads them and puts them in the book!!! I honestly think it would be awesome if the things get added better it would definitely help her especially with safty.... lol So please AUTHOR take a look and let me know what u think!!! But regardless on what comments I have in the newest chapter this book is still awesome amd I hope u keep going with it and hope that u can add at least 1or2 more chapters a week if possible please!!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK ON THIS BOOK!!!!
How about family?