I absolutely love this story. The world they build is well thought out and interesting to read. The way they adapt gods and characters to fit in a video game world while still keeping their personalities from mythology is just really awesome.
The story has a very keen eye to details which appreciated. I read this story with ease as there was no detectable grammatical errors or anything. It's very sensual and hot! The writer cleverly uses words to describe things/tools without just stating it. You have to use your imagination, which is far better. You have to check this story out!
good story even if there are a some gramma errors.the mc is unnatural lucky ith drops, skills pets etc that its feels forced.mc is kind of dump to me!
WTH is this Reviews? Why does all of look like a scammer fooling some people.
Title: 我的成就系统大有问题Author: 天锣雷光Status: 282 Chapters and ongoingPosted the name for people looking for it. This seems to be one of the more interesting ones so I plan to read it next week.
Raw please ?.........................................................................................................mmm....................
Great novel ...... unfortunately I have to drop it since I can't tolerate him being a simp towards two women (those two just don't deserve it). Simping should have limits!!!
Since most authors rate their novel 5 stars, I shall do the same right? surely not looking for any excuse to rate my story 5 stars... surely not....Now then as every author would like to say, please check out my novel and be patient with it. I would take all constructive criticism and try to improve upon them. As English is not my mother tongue so there could be structural mess but it'll get better I promise. Lastly please vote my novel with power stones so web novel knows that you're enjoying what you're reading and don't forget to add it to the library. ( I definitely did not copy that line from a youtube channel... ahem)...Take care guys and be safe.peace;
Wish that every novel that are like this gets the author slapped every chapter they make
to be honest, this novel is kind of mix from other novel. the MC is quite strong, but she couldn't manifest her ability due to her mentality and other reason. if the world max lv is 99. the she must the apex predator there. with her body or race much stronger then the original inhabitants of the world, she should be able to fight. (look the Overlord, Ainz is max leveled and he is unstoppable in that world)
Considering the updates... as far as I can see they're coming in consistently. But regarding the characters and the setting.. I feel like it's a copy of overlord. The magic, the mc, his attendants(the azaroth castle monsters) . It seems like the author was 'heavily' inspired from overlord. Azaroth is like Nazarick, his attendant Aurelle? I think her name was, is like Albedo and he himself resembles Ainz in some ways. Universe items, world items, magic tiers and stuff... so yea. Sorry if I offend you author, but this is my honest opinion... ?
The story has a lot of depth into this world that was created and I hope you'll keep making more amazing chapters in the future. Even with some of the writing mistakes, the story is very intriguing and I would recommend more people to read it.