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(Minor spoilers, but mostly kept vague, and the spoilers are obvious things that you knew would happen.) Major Complaint Many of the big events happen off-screen and the author merely gives you a summary. Did you want to read every moment of Ning Cheng healing Luo Fei's face? From the moment Ning Cheng acquires the potion, when she views her face in the mirror, and then jumps into his arms with joy? Too bad, Ning Cheng merely shows up to see her face was already healed by someone else. Did you want to see him avenge the Ning clan? That was done by an unknown person off-screen. Even Ning Cheng commented on how dissatisfying it was that this big issue couldn't be solved by him. By that point I would say 2/3 of the big moments that could happen, happened off-screen. The other big moment was returning to Earth, with which I was happy. This approach to writing is like editing the goals out of a World Cup match and replacing them with a broadcaster in a studio describing them. Characters Are Very Good Obviously the best part of this series is the character work. I love anytime differences between characters are pointed out and they actually are genuine. The political scheming of powerful emperors was well done. Some characters progress over hundreds of chapters. In some cases I would say the drastic changes can turn a unique character into a forgettable overlord, but people like character progression. Inconsistent Writing of Otherwise Likable MC The writing of the MC is not consistent. This isn't that he behaves very different based on his relative power level. In the first 100 chapters he isn't too overbearing, but he stands up for himself, even if it might lead to death. Like the MC in Mortal Immortal, at those points he relies on kind strangers to save his life. Around chapters 450-570 he is groveling and spineless, uttering lines like, "Junior doesn't dare!" I had to skip large parts of 450-570. I couldn't watch him be so pathetic and cowardly. Other than this, he's basically never unlikable. There are a number of times when he groped women, and other worse acts, but I blame the author and genre conventions for this.Poorly Written Overall Many aspects of this series are poorly written. Often times GooseFive doesn't know how to setup the circumstances he wants, so situations comes off as ridiculous, sometimes laughably so. The rules around his cheats and items are loose and can change at any time. Villains will wildly guess with perfect accuracy who killed a member of their sect. The author will forget about some of his characters then later claim Ning Cheng, who has perfect memory, is the one who forgot them. I still enjoyed 2/3 of my time reading this series.
After Eris leaves Rudeus is the definition of focus on yourself king. Man's getting his gains
Love the whole book except Ruiyi. Her character is stubborn and end up the most irritating. I gave up reading her story eventually.
Chapter 105. Why did I read that one comment in Loki's voice? Like I could clearly imagine his voice saying that
What a delightful story! The story is a perfect blend of romance and charm. The characters are lovable and the plot keeps you engaged till the end. It's a wonderful escape into a beautifully written love story.
The novel is good better than most translated out there. The problem i have was that everyone MC connect with betray him for just no reason.
The writer also have problems with his siblings in real life and because of that everywhere he go he happened to meet a family that want to kill him and he kill them back.
To me everything feel forced, trying to create sensational situations just to justify MC murderous desire.
Dude LoL, your synopsis had me going for a moment there, the novels just as good, seriously like your sense of humor
Intresting, a little too fast paste but I’ m curious to see more
Seems like I am the first one..
Let me tell you this novel has some good character design... To be honest, I don't really read this type of novel. But I somehow get attached to it.. I really felt annoyed by the mc... I do understand that he has his reasons... But I do feel annoyed of him and I can't helped it...
Writing quality was really good. It's easy to read novel... The only problem is I want more frequent updates... But it's a good story overall.. You guys should at least read 2-3 chapter before judging this novel..
Title says First day in game...theres no game at all...