Why was this novel dropped, I really liked this novel.??I am very sad, why this novel was dropped ....................................................................
Another journey' ha...Is this a new year gift or something ?Well I hope it's as good as other works ?.............................................................
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It is an interesting story and I want to know what happens so I keep reading. But story is written with overly detailed explanation. So the same thing is explained often in many different ways. Often I can skip half the page because it explains the same thing. And it repeats information to often. It makes me question if the writer is scared that the reader forgot thinks.But because the story itself is nice and it keeps me interested for how the character will develop himself in the further future I want to see it until the end. Hopefully the writer will know tro time that it is not required to explain some think repeatedly. Atthis moment it can be seen as filler story but I don’t think that that is the intention of the writer.
I am SCREAMING where has this book been please?! I love the MC because he is so far from a 2D character design; The writing holds actual presence, an actual person in these words with a rawness of a really great character build and almost ensured potential. I can’t wait!!
Its good but the paste of the update is slow but i give it to you you have a good work i approved to you????????..................................
uhh not really satisfied with last chap like wth why is there a another him and also its stupid well i know u can do etter next chap well no need to edit i am not well srry if i said somthing bad
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MCs characters keeps going downhill. One of the worst harems easily and well ruined it at the ra$e out of nowhere along with the stupid justifications.
Don't go in! Mcs IQ done ran backwards into infinity^2. Man's should have been dead first day he transmigrated. Don't let this book get put up for translation. Let translation team do something else.
I really liked the story, especially since I read the authors previous stories. Up to chapter 40 translation is good, but after chapter 40 translation becomes similar to mtl. I don't have patience to read such translation no matter how much I like the story. If someone knows where I can read this story with good translation please post in comments.
Pretty good so far NGL.