I love reading story on transmigration or if it's about 'stuck inside a game'. The title was interesting so I came here. The Explanation is smooth as well. It's a good story at least from what I've read till now.
Your story is similar to something I’m writing. It’s interesting. However, from an author’s point of view I think it was too rushed. You’re clearly very imaginative. Overall, I enjoyed it. Well done. It’s got adventure, magic and fantasy and even some mystery.
الى الان بناء الاحداث جيد جدا والشخصيات لم نتعرف عليها جيدا لكن شخصيه البطل جيده للان اما عن العالم فلم يتوضح بعد لكن من الاحداث الجاريه نعرف ان العالم سيكون افضل من المتوسط
I like how it starts, and the way it unfolds so far is really good. I hope it continues at this pace. I'm excited to see Kodach's growth.
Lucia is now one of my favorite female characters! I love a fierce, sassy red head who knows what she wants and doesn’t back down. Love it!
l like the story, good job author , wishing your story continued success
This novel might have some mistakes and may sometimes have some of the most unrealistic situations happen. But all I got to say is give it a chance and if you like it continue to read it. I'll also try to keep up with chapter uploads but don't count on me for that. and I'll also not give myself a shameless 5 stars and will show my genuine thoughts on my own novel.
I like the story development and especially the theme.
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"Mind your language, young lady! You're being quite offensive!" (Jason exclaimed with anger.)
"Apa jangan-jangan kau menyukai Soo jung?" tebak Chang min