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it is a very good story...I like it at the beginning and middle part of the story....but at the end...it just start to drag..
-The people were transported in an unknown world, a wastland with limited ressources and dangerous beasts, each one isolated. Yet, by day 3 some people had gathered together into communities of more than 10 people without any means to properly locate each others. They delayed placing their shelters to stumble around for at least a day with limited food, water, and dangerous unknown beasts around. It’s unthinkable.-Whatever he needs, he get it within a day. Blast resistant glass, I’m looking at you.-I can accept the trade function, as it was really necessary to trade ressources. The chat function and leaderboard with streaming ruined half of the settings: apocalyptic wilderness survival. -It looks like people from the same country were transported in the same region. Looks like a plot device to keep national borders troubles even though the goal is supposed to be humanity survival.4 chinese shelters in the top 10. American bashing chinese. Humanitarian chinese shelter looking after the weak. China best much, and it’s only been 5 days.-The protagonist seriously lacks personality.
I find the idea of the system interesting. The MC's personality is fun, apparently it's liberal to have more than one woman, but he has a maximum limit of 10 women or is subject to a fine.MC loves to read, and even when he walks he is reading, and because of that, he earns money and can evolve the system through reading.For me it's been a fun experience, if you have time, give it a try too.
I'm reading it on another site to chapter 286 and I enjoyed it.............................................................................
Good.
this story is really good, it has plenty of given information, fight scense are nicely written, mc is kinda strong but he isn’t some world ending guy.
LBL COME BACKKKKKKITS BEEN YEARSYOU CANT JUST WRITE THINGS LIKE THIS AND LEAVEEEEJust one chap a year im beggingAt least drop character designs so I can draw up my own fanart to sate my cravings-
Couldn't get very far on this one. Too fast passed, too bland, and too self indulging. The writing didn't build up anything worth paying attention to and even if I was gonna get intrigued by something the end point to whatever it is would have whizzed past me before I could finish getting interested.
Shameless Author review my last novel was a dude because while I could imagine and plan out later arcs the beginning was too hard to right. This one will be different so try and stick for the ride.
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Amazing story, good humour, great action and a lot of faceslapping moments. The perfect formula for a cultivation novel. Highly recommend it