mayankharwani22
Updated review now that the book has gone premium. The book has stuck to its good points and the updates have been daily without fail. More of the world is being introduced and the characters are becoming more solid.
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Some typos at the start but the story so far for me is top and I can see he or she is tryings lots. Never seen something like this, the character isn't emo and is pretty funny after he gets his emotions back. AND ITS NOT EXTRA DRAMATIC... love the work author keep it up!
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Very naive. Written by a child, because I don't suspect an adult of such naivety. Descriptions and lack of details and lack of maturity in descriptions. A story for children, and very naive children at that. Adults will get bored after a few pages. Unfortunately, my rating is low as is the quality of this thing.
Oh! Man, MC looked badass when he underwent Inverse Mode. Keep it up.
But the surroundings can be described even more, try to focus on that, except that, I liked your Novel.??
I haven't read much yet but I just wanna say that this book is wonderful. The synopsis grabbed my attention and the story development is wonderful. Good job Author!
ITS BACK FROM THE GRAVE WOOHOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!Let’s goooo redemption of Webnovel.
It's good enough................................................................................................................
Welp! First 4 chapters are done and I can't deny that it's written smoothly. I'm intrigued, very much so✨~ I like the flow so far so I know this will make me wait for the future chaps with full anticipation ?#Support, support, support!#Go_Author!
Surprisingly good I must say , Didn’t expect what came out even to be honest … Keep up the good work , I can tell that author san has a bright writing future up ahead . Well wishes .
MC is op, adapts fast , knows his way around women , good plot line , story spans across many worlds which is very good , has harem which is excellent overall nice novelbut why are there no updates for this novel ?
