This story has a lot of potential, a good and enjoyable plot, most importantly, a relatable and interesting Mc, the grammar is good and understandable,the author did a great job!
I'll give it this rating for now until my question is answered.Is the stay in the book temporary or permanent? is he going to go back to his own life (I hope not).
I've always loved novels like Fantasy simulator and 48 hours a day where the author is able to get you to connect to characters in such a short period, the starts is a bit dull but afterwards the story completely changes quality.
It's a fun adventure story, the characters are good and some are ridiculous like Gaffin. I like story with adventure genre like this, cause i like adventure. Good story for adventure and thriller lover.
This novel has a ton of potential but sadly is held back by a ton of grammar issues that makes it look like it was translated by a machine. If the novel was rewritten with proper grammar and some of the sentences were revised to flow more easily then this would be a 5 star book. Another problem is that dialogue comes in the middle of paragraphs and is not separated when different people start talking making it hard to follow. The sex scenes are terrible and impossible to understand while having an unnecessary amount of cussing.
Really enjoying this story! The action and horror scenes are gripping and intense, the prose flows nicely. The descriptions are vivid and you can picture yourself in the scene. The characters are interesting and three dimensional. Keep up the good work! Looking forward to reading more.
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Good use of words, the story develops well through out the chapters and the picture created is beautiful, it compliments the subject of the story
does the protagonist say he follows the path of evil? compare him and the mc of reverend insanity or wmw.this novel has absolutely nothing creative and innovative, it is like reading any other novel. the author just added a little '' sex '', '' evil '' and some bs, to create an illusion that this novel is different from the others. this protagonist is by no means intelligent and rational, he does not seem to think what can happen in the future because of his decisions and any treasure, skill ... it is all luck. another very irritating situation is the fact that if an enemy is a woman, there will probably be several situations where the protagonist will start to have some feeling for her. although she previously tried to kill him or capture him, everything in the end seems to be irrelevant because she is a woman.
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I can say....the first chapter is really hilarious and amazing! The Mc is a cussing machine and swears a lot! ??? When he called at customer service to complain, I suddenly remember my previous job that a customer swears a lot like Fu Jie ??? My stomach hurts from laughing! ??? Love this novel ??????
I will shamelessly support a work from fellow writer, so I hope u can get what you want. Also I expect to see a different plot line that’ll be different than normal ones. Do your best and show yourself!