From reading the first five chapters of this book. I can tell that it will be amazing. I love the way how Storm shows that she is trying not to be affected by Kaden, in truth though she really is affected by him.
The story has potential, but the grammatical errors make it frustrating to read.
I need to talk about Qin Zichuan because this boy is EVERYTHING. The scene where he pretends to hate Mianmian but clearly stayed up looking for her? Classic. When he calls her a pig at breakfast and then watches her eat five buns in complete shock? Hilarious. But the moment that actually got me was when he stood up abruptly after she asked if he was worried and said 'I hate you the most' while clearly being flustered. That is textbook tsundere behavior and I am HERE for it. And the sibling dynamic between Mianmian and Qin Yuchuan? Chilling. When he's on that rooftop, hollow-eyed and beard-streaked, and she tells him she cares about him — and then deliberately puts herself in danger to reach him — that's the kind of moment that makes you realize this child has somehow become the emotional anchor for literally everyone in this family. Qin Yunchuan carries guilt about sending Yuchuan to the countryside, and now Yuchuan is self-harming and attempting suicide. The weight this family carries is enormous. Gu Xu is also fascinating — he's quietly keeping score of who wrongs Mianmian. When Qin Ershen tries to attack her at the hospital, Gu Xu 'quietly recorded this score in his mind.' That man is dangerous and I love him for it. Also the fact that he ate the bun Mianmian brought him like a normal person instead of being weird about it? Growth.
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This novel appears to blend Korean elements seamlessly into its Japanese origin, creating a fascinating cultural fusion. If you enjoy both cultures, it might resonate well with you. However, it could potentially highlight aspects you don't like from either while overlooking what you appreciate. Reading a bit will help you decide.
Personally, I appreciate the uniquely Korean setting (contemporary urban dungeon world) and the protagonist, who exhibits a more assertive and proactive nature compared to typical Japanese MCs. The novel also incorporates elements I enjoy from Japanese literature, such as relatable slice-of-life scenes and softer heroine approaches towards the main character, which I feel is a refreshing change from some Korean novels.
Unfortunately, there are a few drawbacks. The main character's behavior can be frustrating, as he often acts like a typical shonen hero, believing himself invincible and risking his life unnecessarily without considering the consequences. He has a financial responsibility towards his sister and sacrifices luxuries due to their financial constraints, yet chooses high-risk battles over safer alternatives.
What's concerning is that the author abruptly alters his character's personality, retroactively explaining his actions. The MC's transformation feels forced, with no clear indication of these traits earlier in the story.
Despite these issues, I still believe the novel is worth giving a chance, especially if it piques your interest. If you're intrigued by the premise, I encourage you to read it.
very fun story
I'm here to read more hate comments ??
Would you still love me if I turned into a snail
IIRC the author wrote something that could be viewed as Criticism of Chinese government/politician and got censored (I'm fuzzy on the exact details) . So unfortunately there isn't more to this which sucks cause I really enjoyed where it was heading.
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I thoroughly enjoyed the novel. It perfectly caters to the blend of historical Ancient China and the Yandere theme. The male lead's character leans more towards being unpredictable rather than having a mischievous nature. The protagonist's perspective is spot on when they say, "Their past flaws led to an unhappy ending," but this time, things are different. The progression of their relationship and the development of understanding between them is what makes it such a compelling read. With the added intrigue of palace politics, it becomes an engaging story.
In general, I really enjoy the series. Initially, it was a warm and lighthearted tale with romantic elements, and even the story arcs felt more episodic in nature. I would have preferred a single storyline without the harem aspect, and I do think the main character takes up an excessive amount of the narrative focus. However, I still appreciate the family dynamics and interactions.
I am particularly fond of the protagonist's irreverent dialogue and actions, which add a refreshing touch to the story. I commend the translator for their excellent adaptation, capturing the essence of the original work so well. And let's be clear, Lefi is definitely the standout character in my opinion.