How is a 17 year old a loli? Aren't lolis those girls who are like 8 or 9 and below?
I agree with everyone’s comments - interesting concept the beginning of the story was good ... but about 100+ chapters in, it’s now exhausting to read with Keeley (FL)’s attitude... that you actually feel really bad for Aaron trying so hard to make things right. I’m struggling with the idea to continue reading the next 300+ (short) chapters if nothing progresses....
I love the story so so much!
you're one of my fav authors now >:)
I just have one thing to say, Moreee from the author
Very refreshing, gives appreciation to story pacing and steady progress. A wonderful work by the author, great job!
Five stars because I like my story.
Welcome to my first novel!
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What can I say more??I love this Book ?❤️???????????????❤️
I deeply enjoyed this book. please endeavor to read it
For a story that started off without expectations of being *something*, it ended up being a nifty read. Nothing magnificent, but hey what's enjoyable is enjoyable. Gotta say, the two bodies thing's a total charmer (pun wasn't but then became intended). Even if it was the product of a random idea, that aspect's probably the thing that kept me liking this read the most instead of going 'ehh alright'. I made this review as of chapter 173; I'd say the quality of the story improved getting deeper in too. Still nothing magnificent as I said, but charming.
i really like this novel,at first I thought the mc has no motivation no ambition so after reading 100 chap i was disappointed but after 200 chap the story line was improved drastically and now I think it is better than tyranny of steel.but one of the most frustrating thing is that the update frequency is really bad.we have to wait 2 or 3 days for 1 chap.i think author should concentrate one novel at a time.please author if you reading this please at least update daily,it will be better if 2 chaps in a day
All these reviews and not a single synopsis or summary. The authors “just read the first ch” is arrogant and annoying I have literally no idea what the book is about and no way to find out so no I will not just “read the first chapter”
I really want to like it. It has the necessary ingredients, but it falls flat because the chef doesn't know what to do with them.There are so many words in every chapter, but nothing of importance is being said.I read 16 chapters and I've found myself skimming through most of it, as it was mostly pointless nonsense.And when there's suddenly something interesting going on, the POV suddenly switches to some random dude and his sister, or some random dudes drinking and talking about something. Don't know what, I just skipped past the whole thing.I don't think I'll continue reading past the first 20 chapters, unfortunately. It's all a convoluted mess and nothing makes sense. Driving the reader mad with gibberish is a great way for your readers to immerse themselves in your novel, but it's not for me.