a very nice writing and you describe the characters really well. Reading the prologue is not enough so I had to read the next chapter and not gonna lie, it shocked me and kinda didn't see that coming. Well done??
I don't know why it's receiving so many 5 stars. Ok it's true that story is bit interesting but that is all there is to it as for the cons:1. story is so inconsistent that it makes me want to smash my head to a wall for example in first chapter author said that here countries have different name and there is no countries like china, USA etc then suddenly 10 chapters later there is ancient Chinese literature and a robbery which takes place in new Zealand. Status system is so random that it doesn't make sense at all. first his status increased when he was fighting, Then he suddenly can increase it himself, then it again went back to be randomly distributed wth it's like every chapter is written by different writer2. story flow is totally erratic sometimes a incident which have been foreshadowed for 3-4 chapters just happens in 4-5 lines and you'd be like 'have i missed a chapter'. plus bunch of details are given on color of streets and hair color of the people (Literally paragraphs) but when it comes to mc's power ups, status etc there is nothing at all. suddenly mc's increased his strength no description is given at all
Gila keren banget ceritanya benaran dibuat sangat baik, sampai ada peta yang menjelaskan, buat ceritanya jadi lebih hidup. ceritanya sangat bagus. i like it
You should really continue writing is I really like it its just sad that you stopped mid way. Please continue I really want to know what happens next
Typical dual world setup with cultivation elements.Feels nice to read, though it suffers from typical pacing issues like other webnovels.I like the first 19 chapters. Hopefully it won't become a faceslapping fest later.
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Please waiting for an updateee..... and looking forward on what would happened...... pleasea.....??
The story seems to be good as of yet, the spelling errors are unrecognizable to my overly sensitive to errors brain. And the nice added in comedy is a nice touch. Overall the book is really good!
This is a really great book with the theme of magic and isekai which I appreciate so very much. I like how the MC makes so many reliable friends and I also like how he has the drive to become stronger by all means possible
10/10 would recommend. The grammar here has a few minor errors that are clearly simple oversights, but other than that, the command of the English language here is more than what you'd expect from an amateur Author. You're really good.
This novel had soo much potential like this novel was going in the best direction possible.Everything was perfect. The IRL part of this novel was perfect. Untill around chapter 800+THE MC aquires a technique from the dragon which is where you have near infinite Libido but when you have *** with a female she would go crazy and it would boost the MC power. It also made every female attracted which is why they banned it. Anyway there is about 50 chapters in a row about smut like after those 50 chapters it still gets mentioned twice every 3 chapters. Anyway the novel almost got ruined but it picked itself back up again. But then the Curse the god damm curse. This made him going around collecting women to be his demon spirits this caused him to almost have a all out war with a guy who had very high cultivation. BUT THEN IT GOT EVEN WORSE the mc can defeat people 3 major realms below him. DID YOU HEAR THAT 3 REALMS. BUT then it got soo bad that i gave up on it. I saw some reviews about the novel being super slow paced which i thought was true to a certain extent but then there was like 100 of them so i searched up his territory ranking and at chapter 1400 ish he was a barony level 2 but all the worlds surrounding him (Inner domain) were wanting to bootlick as they thought he would be a royal kingdom which was correct but IT TOOK 1100 CHAPTERS TO DO IT like it happened around chapter 2400 anyway at that moment i decided FML im dropping this abomination of a novel. Oh Yeah F*** the origin mark and bloodlines.And it was going soo god damm well around chapter 700
the manga is very good and awesome it's intelligence and action and I like it's manga and I could not wait for it's new chapter so I started reading it's novel