A Complete Mess of a Timeline!
I can’t believe how frustrating this was! From the very first page, it felt like I was thrown into a chaotic blender of ideas. Seriously, it’s like the author couldn’t decide what story to tell and just threw everything at the wall to see what stuck.
One moment we’re in the middle of a tense scene, and the next, it jumps to a completely different plot point without any warning. It’s maddening! The timeline is so jumbled that I found myself lost, flipping back and forth just trying to piece together what was happening.
Instead of a cohesive narrative, I got a disjointed mess that left me confused and irritated. I wanted to engage with the story, but I couldn’t because it felt like I was following a train wreck.
Do yourself a favor and skip this one unless you enjoy frustration and chaos. Save your time and sanity!
Too interesting and intriguing, quite well pacing and different yet simple on its own
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it has no soul in it, and is the most generic book i have ever seen. MC who is a nobody now, A bestfriend who betrays you, a ugly girl from school who is sexy and successful now, gets attacked as soon as he gets the system but is not able to do anything so have to make a deal with the system
try out 'trash of count'
my favourite book
wonder y u nvr gave then a kid or a book 3
So far it has been good but honestly I hope the story turns for the better because it was going pretty good until the last few chapters! I trust the author will deliver something great but the I haven’t loved the latest chapters
Of what I have read this book is amazing. The author is amazing. I've read a bit of some other works by this author and I'm hooked. The writing style, the way each line is written is just amazing. 10/10 would recommend to anyone!
What a story ...️ .. loved it … You become my favorite author .. too good but please update it please please please
Awesome story line!
I have read all of your stories except this one yet. I am about to read this one. Honestly I normally skip chapters when I read werewolf stories cause they are pretty much same!
Your each of the stories are different unique and interesting. I loved all of them. Please keep writing. I am a huge fan