I am thoroughly enjoying this, the writing is good ?
If you have nothing to do, this is a good way to kill time if you are bored.
I absolutely love this book! It’s such a captivating read, filled with incredible storytelling, vivid characters, and a plot that keeps you hooked from start to finish. The way the author weaves together themes and emotions is truly impressive, making every page a delight to read. Whether it’s the moments of tension, humor, or deep reflection, this book has a way of pulling you in and making you feel connected to its world. The writing style is engaging and flows so effortlessly, making it hard to put down once you start. It’s one of those books that stays with you long after you’ve finished, leaving you thinking about its messages and characters. I can’t recommend it enough to anyone who loves a well-written, thoughtful, and utterly enjoyable story. It’s an absolute gem!
The character development in the early chapters is strong, and the pacing is spot on, building the story in a compelling way. The detailed narrative really enhances the world-building, making the setting feel vivid and immersive. (ФωФ) Plus, with action scenes beginning to emerge, I’m excited to see where the story goes next. Looking forward to the upcoming chapters!♡(ﾟ∀ﾟ 三 ﾟ∀ﾟ) ♡
Things have gotten pretty interesting, even in the earlier stages of the novel. I've really liked James, one of the characters, who's special circumstances make him extremely unpredictable and dangerous, even he doesn't intend to. Great read for anyone looing for a good sci-fy.
good story good wishes i would also wish something like this mc
Great start Author, I really like the story although of course there are only 4 chapters but it will be quite good in my opinion.??????
hehehe I'm just being shameless here. I forgot to upload the chapters in my draft.
I recommend this book it has fun and enjoyable characters. It also has good pacing and good arcs for the beginning!!!
Would like more interaction between ML and FL. More with other characters such as Generals and support characters etc. Great idea but poor use of the idea. All you get so far is a lot of money spent, a lot of groveling, a lot of shopping lists. The use of modern machines seems hard to hide to me. I would think an army would come just to steal the trucks etc. More thought to what you would really be able to use and keep running in such an environment. Green house would be more sustainable than diesel fuel vehicles. Artic weather coming and you are looking to transport millions of tons of coal?
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I'm currently hooked, I like Elijah, I like how we get to see what he is before he turned to a villain or what's the reason why he turned into a villain