This is a super confusing and pedantic novel!!! I really don't understand why people are supporting this novel. Don't get picked!Contrary to it's hashtag, it is not relaxing at all, just boring and dull.Read "Immortal in the Magic World" soo much better, best novel in this trail!
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So far the premise is interesting and the story is funny, I enjoy the mc’s personality and if you’re looking for a fun read about reincarnation I’d recommend it
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the first 40 chaps were okay and paywall I was dumbstruck as to how terrible translation was. It's like a mtl translation. also you will find the pro nation thing here.
A new twist on the common trope of VRMMO novels. Giving better quality to the MC and showing the dark side of the Corporate overlords. The writing quality is pleasant too and it flows smoothly.DO give it a try.
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Good novel it has handsome mc , harem and dual cultivation the best thing you find in novels ????????????????????????????
I'm writing this review, not to actually review the novel but to review the people reading the novels, more accurately, I'll just go on a rant about people that waste resources of the Earth by being so stupid that they don't understand things so simple like 'why MC acted like that', so now, why did he 'scold' the maid? Simple, it's in the sentence, she's a maid, he's a Young master, there's nothing else to say, but I know people are too stupid to understand that or else they wouldn't be shocked at this scene, so I'll write a bit more, you see, the thing is, I don't put it in the way that MC got the young master's memory, I'd rather think, the Young master got memories from Earth, and created a whole new person owning the memories of both of them, the MC, this person has memories of Earth and this world, if he has memories from both of them, he has a hint of both of their personality, now think about it, the maid is a maid, the MC is a young master, the maid is being disrespectful and ask for something precious while the MC has the memory of a young master with bad temper... OBVIOUSLY HE SCOLDS HER, now, please, understand this simple thing.
Writing quality has some flaws to it but eventually what really matters is the flow and how fun it is to actually read and although it has some mistakes but nothing major.The prompt is a sage from presumably a fantasy-type world with magic transmigrating to a cultivation world and within that cultivation world, he seems to want to explore whatever he couldn't in his original fantasy world. Not many chapters have been released as of yet but in my opinion, while the prompt is really good, way too much stuff happens within those 11 chapters and it's just really tiring. Like the young master that took a good portion of 2 chapters for pretty much nothing, He might encounter the young master's family later or he won't but eventually, it's not really interesting to have this entire subplot branch out from just him bumping into someone. In 12 chapters he cured some city lord's daughter, fought with a young master from a tycoon family, saved a young lady of another house, combined the different energies he had and some other more minor events but I hope you get that these are all pretty big events and are the buildup for the rest of story atm and it just seems really rushed to me to just give each of these subplots barely 1 chapter and moreover this 1 chapter for each of them occupies a huge part of the 12 chapters that have been released so far so we don't get much info on the world background like the strength of cultivators, what even are cultivators in the first place - cultivators in other novels can definitely cast spells even outside of arrays so are cultivators in this world only able to strengthen their physique and practice martial skills? I can only assume he bought a cultivation technique of the lowest grade because of the price which is odd since either way from what you said it takes a lot of time and effort to transfer from one technique to another. Also, these little bits that are seemingly meaningless like him showing off his 'wealth' to some random attendant that is for some reason arrogant and it just doesn't make much sense for a clerk to be arrogant I mean most of their job is just being courteous.TL: DR - It feels to me that way too many events and flags are being squeezed into these 12 chapters. Creating the new energy for example should be a really big event and not some random thing that gets overshadowed by him overstaying in the cultivation room. IMO more time should be invested into expanding on the world background specifically the cultivation system before we start with all of these events (i.e. interaction with other characters that seems crucial to the plot).
What? I thought it was in the rejected pile? Maybe because of CN success? Well I'm following the latest CN so don't really care but might be fun to reread the earlier arcs again.ps: If the system female gift offended you, it's better to not continue. There will be similar situations, not to mention borderline brain control curses & 'furnace'(idk how the translator will translate this) training arts, etc. Ofc the MC is always innocent, either controlled by the system, to save the girls life or to save his own like by controlling enemy, etc.
The writing is fine as well as the updates, but the world background is a complete ripoff of previously existing translated novels on this website, for example, the old man buying food for his pet, both were fire type which he could've at least changed the element but no he didn't. Another point, is the angel he met, the only difference is that its an angel instead of a protass/god, otherwise its exactly the same other than the fact that he made it earlier on in the story. Feel free to delete this author, but i can keep writing a new review.