AshBurn
Wow... this is crazy shameless. well here we go.Swept it is my first effort here on webnovel and yep I am very biased.main character: Rachel is pretty lazy, but she is chosen and is about filling duty even though she would rather just be somewhere else. Even though she does like to feel internal emotion she still finds the time to anyalizes the behavior of those around her (internally of course). is she arrogant? a bit. Is she overpowered? definitely and all of it is innate which will probably annoy many.the place: well that is super complicated. what can I say I am a complicated writer. she is from Trannisa it is a core realm with the Zala dimension. it is not a planetary realm but instead has floating land masses within an illuminated blue sky above a black "abyss" that is not an abyss. you gotta read it to understand it darling, sorry. but Trannisa is her home and she protects it. maintaining a crazy balance that she needs to continually re-evaluate. Don't worry about the five stars I gave. I already said that I was biased and we gotta start somewhere. how do I look giving myself one star. you would think I had low self esteem.read it. tell me what you think. keep my stars high or break my heart. either way I appreciate all comments and reviews.
Author here, so check it out, if you are just reading it then welcome. give me your feedback and for those following it before from the previous title then let's go guys. happy to see you guys.. thanks for the love and support much appreciated ?
It's good ............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
This is a great story but there's not much chapters yet but it's a great start! .............................................................................
this novel looks fun but unfortunately I can't read Spanish
As the chapters progress, it's strange and unusual, there's a lot of mystery around the main characters, and it makes me look forward to what's next every time 9/10Building the world, this world, people live in the standard of strong and weak, reputation and status, there are all kinds of heroes and demons spread in the world spreading their names, anyway, the power system is unique, and is based on 4 aspects, talent, weapon, and which They call it the ego, the path, the most mysterious yet, the level. There are still no higher worlds or anything that indicates this, the highest level is rank 8, the cultures in this story are divided between 4 cultures, the Morim, the nobles, the magicians, and the monster humans.I give it 10/10, that's unique and exciting The fights are simply amazing, at first the difference is huge, but in close battles, intelligence, cunning, courage and different styles are displayed. There are events brewing, and tribes are fighting, everyone is doing their job based on their interests, and that makes it more exciting than just random fighting. There is no harem yet, and there is no exact indication of it. There are some minor hints of romance, but they have no impact on events. This is a genius move, author. Yes, definitely, 10/10!
I LOVE THE WAY THE STORY WAS WRITTEN. I WILL LOOK FORWARD TO THIS AUTHOR. I WOULD LIKE TO READ MORE. THIS STORY DESERVES 5 STARS. GOOD JOB!
Another amazing start to an interesting story. The writing quality is phenomenal and I look forwards to where it goes.
Good evolution of the characters, girls aren't thrown aside, don't rely too much on luck to become strong.I had a great time reading this story.
"Open your eyes," he commanded.
"C-come on Doc ..!" i got an eletric shock.
Dark pouring potion into the magic cauldron, then his face slightly angrily and turned towards Jester.
