a colorful cute love story that one can indulge on his/her free time
Just finished this book, and it was amazing as usual. Each book I read makes me love your writing style more. You're my favourite author on GoodNovel now. I'm looking forward to reading more! <3 :) XOXO
The beginning is promising, but it unfortunately deteriorates into a disappointing mess. A notable issue arises later on, where chapter lengths balloon exponentially, making the reading experience拖沓。The romance component is present, though not particularly exceptional.
The plot, however, becomes convoluted with numerous unpredictable twists, occasionally bordering on illogical. For instance, the protagonist suddenly conjures a Death Sun Ray without prior explanation, which deviates from the established pattern of introducing new abilities beforehand. This inconsistency stands out.
In my opinion, I wouldn't advise reading it. While the ending satisfactorily wraps up, the chapters beyond Chapter 110 become increasingly tedious. There are a few unnecessary subplots, such as the purification of the oasis arc, that serve little purpose.
The only redeeming aspect is the character Tio, the dragon, who brings some humor. Otherwise, the book doesn't offer much value. The main character's softening due to influence from his harem members from his previous life becomes a major annoyance, especially when it affects his decision-making negatively.
As someone who doesn't particularly enjoy harem stories, I initially didn't mind when it started, but the impact on the MC's behavior turned it sour. If you're considering it, I'd suggest waiting for the anime adaptation, as it's more likely to address these issues and provide a better viewing experience.
The story had promise, perhaps bordering on a 3 out of 5 or at its peak, a 3.5, if one enjoyed the concept of battle academies and immersive gaming worlds. However, the main character's unlikability significantly detracts from the overall experience. The protagonist relies solely on their Yuri-centric focus, constantly narrating their thoughts on protecting it. While the Yuri theme might have been a running joke, it becomes grating when it dominates the character's thoughts to the point of melancholy. The series has the foundation for engaging content, but unfortunately, it squanders its potential by repeatedly relying on the same tired gag, hoping for a different reaction each time, but ultimately falling flat.
Here's the translation:
One thing I can share: Our FL is indeed an astute woman. She employs any means necessary to win over ML's affection. It's understandable, considering the potential consequences if ML regains his memories and she risks losing him. The early chapters were quite painful to read, as ML's heart seemed unyielding, and he viewed her more as a disposable entity. It's a complicated dynamic, but I still find myself deeply attached to this story.
that's enough of a description for me to read the story, I'm sold
"doesn't last long" seems kind of subjective no?
She prominently features in like 8-10 different chapters, when listening to her once was more than enough. I'm surprised I gave it that many chances to be honest.
Out of interest what chapter is she gone by, maybe i can skim through to it and continue afterwards.
Google brother recommended me some mystery novel
WHOLESOME 10000% i recommend watching the anime! its blast
Looks like TurtleMe Is still on hiatus
achei o prólogo tão interessante, queria tanto ler a historia correspondente a ele
I am bit confused with d names of the real female lead, in prologue, she is Xia with father & stepmum. then from chapter 1 start, surname zhao, with both parents, n she spent 21yrs of her life with her hubby Zheng. same person as in d prologue?