Very cliche start, with a few ridiculous points in the plot you have to ignore. Like, MC supposed to be top military something... but only been in four years, with no contact in that time. No explanation yet. Writing is mediocre, but the plot has hope within the tropes.
I just don't get this book. There are brainless MCs, but of all the MCs I have ever encountered this one is the most self-destructive I have ever encountered.MC walks a path where resources and Cultivation techniques are provided for practically nothing. He isn't fighting for benefits,he has no need too, but just because he is stubborn he gets into conflict all the time.Then he goes around poisoning others for no reason or benefit. It is like he is trying to create as many blood feuds as possible.The MC was destined to be a winner in life but because he can't take a steep back, is needlessly evil and cruel, can't look at his own situation objectively and is courting death needlessly, he is destined to walk a stony path.Bdw. Side-Characters are cannon fooder and paper thin, world building is illogical and doesn't really make sense in the context of the story.
you need to do more research, golden core isn't powerful at all. this like first couple of chapters I'd full of you pushing to us that "ohhh ancient sect./ golden core powerhouse" no. golden core middle of the beginning levels its like a small boss that shouldn't fill a couple of pages worth just to push on to the readers "he's strong" lol. but good try.
Good read and mc are very merciless. I like how realistic the world-building is, I can imagine the firms monopolising superpowers to profit and possibly take over the world. It adds a sense of relentless hype to the story. good job!
Is this the original author or did someone just copied it from Royal Road or scribblehub where author posted it till 110 chapters...............
The pacing is a bit slow but I feel it will get better with time. This novel has got a different feel to it, it isn’t a cliché start and the characters are likeable. This is my own opinion.
Raw = 今天刚开始养龙的我被女友直播曝光...................................................................................................................
well story is normal not good or bad. the only thing i didn't like is MC. he is always getting beat up by his fiance is just so annoying .
God awful writing quality.The story itself is pretty much written by a child.The author is tunneling the story and not really expanding on the world too much.There are tons of mistakes that are so easy to spot that it makes reading it hard.
wow ok it's awsome. the quality and story is all good. it feels like im reading very popular novel. This story makes the readers want to keep reading.
Nice change of pace from all the other MMORPG novels out there so far. It starts out similarly where the MC is the top player in the game but instead of a betrayal by his best friend and girlfriend. His two best friends notice that he's actually stuck in a rut and has been holding himself back from truly enjoying the game and force him to take a well deserved break. I'm only on Ch 22 but I enjoyed the beginning so far. Very stat oriented once he changes classes but it still progresses instead of just straight numbers. Let's see how it goes.
The prequel to one of, scratch that, THE best Novel here on Webnovel and maybe the best Game-centered Novel in existence!!!!!In the prequel you follow not only TKA´s MC, Ye Xiu, but also Fan- favorite´s like Sun Zheping, Zhang Jiale, Wei Chen, Han Wenqing and, last but not least, Su Muqiu! T-TIf these names don´t tell you anything, no problem!The King´s Avatar is available here on Webnovel and with its 1728 chapters you will have enough to read to last for a while!