I'm happy you made a new book. I love the synopsis and characters. This is an interesting masterpiece, and like the rest of your books, will be a masterpiece.
How did it get to 45 chapters without getting picked????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Revenge (人 •͈ᴗ•͈)Mystery (◕ᴗ◕✿)Romance (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*.✧All the things moonie loves!!!Good story and plot, good writing abilities!My readers, give it a try!
another novel ruined by poor translators. It started ok but after the trial ended it become worse by each chapter
nice cover well done ...... .
I hope takeyoshi sense gets an anime for this uwu he definitely deserves it with this it's like a steampunk berserk and it's amazing absolutely recommend this to everyone
Good novel.Nice fictional work.Nice story flow. ? Giving good feeling about nice outcome.Nice interactions. I think it worth to be wait till end.Good luck.
Author Review/Note: Hi, author here! Just wanted to say thanks for reading this novel, it really means a lot to me that your taking the time out of your day just to read this. Despite it being my first Villain focused novel I hope I can live up to people’s expectations of what I’m trying to make here, so I really do hope you enjoy yourselves. Anywho this is just a personal opinion/review, gonna do a better job at writing the story and give certain characters, depth. and give characters more detail rather than just their looks. As well as the worlds background, so be prepared for that!But once again thank you this means a lot that your reading and waiting
THIS IS SOOO GOOD, I love the way you write, looking like re:monster, a novel that I love, congratulations for such a great novel, I hope you never drop it
There are allot of problems in this novel. Feels like wasted potential.First of the MC is stupid like almost brain dead when the author wants to make him out to be a genius. When in reality he is fucking retarded.He also gets walked over for the first 60+ chapters. The female "guardian" like the girl who is running the prison ****es him over a few times yet mc lets it go like noting happened.... Like totally forgotten not mentioned again. Lets not forget she helped in his execution, did not help him, beaten him half to death a few times, ****ed him over a few more times,....And MC lets it go like noting happened....For some reason mc asks her to join his "team" later. Are we supposed to forget all the shit she did to him?MC also acts arrogant for no reason when he is still a slave. Thinks he acts smug when he is still making money for the guy who killed him and acts all high and mighty for no reason.A few more problems are that the author makes allot of mistakes, and likes to keep the mc weak.MC levels up but author casually forgets about it and then lets mc level it up again and thus waste exp.And one of the biggest brain farts about this is when he finally uses his exp after not using it for no reason (to make the mc even more weak then he already is) he puts all his exp in like the slave "class" and then removes the class 30 minutes later (legit next chapter). So the author is just keeping mc weak for no reason and its really annoying at this point. Like imagine watching mc grind (even thou he is already stacking a shit ton exp but does not use it because "reasons") and then your reward is watching him basically delete the exp. And then he acts all high and mighty thinking he is a genius....Author also can't remember his Tiers, like T1 <25 / T2 25-50 / T3 ... Then he ****ed it up the next time becouse he can't remember what he said the previous chapter.Also the later chapters are full of useless system text stuff just to run up word count.Chapters are also really short, there is like no substance in the chapters except useless system info. For example mc walking then rest of the chapter is his stills that author never uses because he thinks it will be to confusing for him to remember....Also the R18 tag is a ?The only thing we got is that the guy who killed mc slept with the guardian (well that's in plied at least).All in all i'm super disapointed. I expected a badass MC but what we got is a whimp who gets walked all over and does not take revenge.I still can't belive he put all his exp in slave that he saved from like 25 chapters and then removes the class.Like i think this novel will turn out in a shitty hero saves the world kind of garbadge.Writing Quality ⭐⭐⭐⭐Stability of Updates ⭐⭐⭐Story Development⭐⭐⭐Character Design⭐⭐World Background⭐⭐⭐Like MC is way to softhearted for this kind of novel I expected some dark stuff but mc can't even take revenge now so idk what it will turn out to be later in the novel. Also I think I read somewhere author does not want mc to be the owner of slaves??? LIke he can't be the reason for slaves? Are you for real what kind of garbage shit is that! Novel is full of slaves but mc can't own any? It should be one of his skills yet he can't be the reason for slaves .......Also the dark classes are supposed to be feared yet everyone and there Nan shits on mc. Its like author just forgot about the perks.I feel like there is no progression. MC should be a dark necromancer yet he kills no1 and only has "monsters" under his control why no humans?Also the caps are hard to read.
Genuinly good cultivation story. The game elements are almost not there. Its like MC has reality and extra life in paralel universe where he can respawn after death and learn how to cultivate in reality.I read the novel to the evd in raws and it was good untill last chapter but... I did not realize it was last chapter untill I read authors finishing words. For me it felt like novel was cut off on 3/4 and left unfinished.
so what chapter dose it get good. Like an OP mc. Cuz I like it so far but it's slow beyond belief like those books they make u read at school anyways lt me know and I dont mean like lvl 2 I mean like bad ass s*****.