Really liking the story . How many more chapters will the book have?
The story is good so far. The grammatical mistakes are really distracting. Please proof read before updating. But this is good work so far!
the synopsis draws you in wonderfully and they first chapter grips you enough to ensure you want to read the rest. enjoyable and worth it
f***ing love this story. it's so hot!
One of my favorite books. Amazing story that I love to re read from time to time. You really getting into characters and plot
I really loved this book. I hope that there will be another book to this series.
Great work......
A year? And yet no new chapters
I really love this love story ...️
Little Angel you already captured my heart!
Nagmahalan presyo ng chaters! Huhuhu
Honest Review: Frankly, I don't find the plot engaging. The protagonist, who was portrayed as adept at managing her family's business, fell short of my expectations. She lacked the portrayal of an independent woman, coming across as narcissistic and emotionally volatile.
Whenever she returned to reality, her erratic behavior towards her sister, while understandable given her circumstances, seemed inappropriate for her character. If she had used her limited time more strategically, like gathering evidence against her sister or delivering a compelling argument to her father, it would have been more impactful.
The system designed to extend her life through transmigration feels contrived. Instead of a gradual improvement, it's marred by absurd events that停滞 her progress. I predict this pattern will persist throughout the series, making the story拖沓. The system feels manipulative, exploiting the protagonist's points for unnecessary purchases, ultimately leaving her in a vulnerable state.
The system's personality development feels forced, and it's frustrating to witness. As for the male lead, his aloofness is understandable given his emotional recovery process. I empathize with him, unaware that the protagonist's actions are driven by love.
In summary, while the novel isn't terrible, it doesn't stand out either. It's mediocre, lacking depth in both plot and character development. I'll be discontinuing my read for now, but perhaps I'll reconsider if future arcs offer something fresh and less repetitive.